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deep cuts

here we are once again
you are crying. tears are flying
your knife is drenched in blood
i tell you "stop.before you go and die"
you keep on cutting as i say "calm down and stop - it will be ok
"please pull through this
please don't do this"
i take the blade away...
you will live on. you will see another day
but how long until im gone and you get your way?
you die alone
bleeding on the floor...
wishing that you hadn't
looking down at me from heaven or looking up from hell
forever more...

by shadowofasoul
posted on 02/13/2008

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Comment by Poison: Feb 14, 2008 6:55 am
VERY good.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Feb 14, 2008 8:28 am
great poem
Comment by belleamour: Feb 15, 2008 7:39 am
Great peom - good work
Comment by kitten546: Jul 6, 2008 9:59 pm
wow soo good dude >.<
Comment by asdfyz: Aug 21, 2008 6:52 pm
mm. IT jsut seems like people don't wnat to be helped sometimes. You go through all that and try to help people and be there for them and then they jsut do it some more! It's like they are addicted to needing help. But you love that person so you want to help them! It is so messed up. I like the peom though.

It is raw and very real. It isn't generic and you can tell by the quotations that it is something you have actually experienced. Great work. keep it up.
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