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Dear Me

Oh dear me
Why aren't you the same
You used to be so wild
Someone no one can tame

Stuck in your cage
Your an empty shell
Broken and tattered
How far you fell

Your hands are shaking
Your knees hit the floor
They ask whats wrong
You say nothing anymore

It's ok to cry
Just don't let anyone see
For the only person you can trust
Is the one and only me

I will catch you when you fall
I will be your burning wings
I will always be there for you
If only in your dreams

Always by your side
Listening to everything you say
I will always be with you
Till your dieing day

Forever Loving,
You

by UnderUmbrellas
posted on 05/27/2008

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Comment by MindTwister: May 27, 2008 6:57 pm
wow proper deap I'm looking forward to more of your poetry and could you please read my new one I'm from the UK and its 3 AM so im off to bed soon im tired.

http://www.poemofquotes.com/members/love-poetry/my_heart_yours_to_keep
Comment by MonsterBabies: May 27, 2008 7:58 pm
*wipes nose and claps hands* <-(Thats actually kind of gross if you think about it) haha

Nice peice of stuff youve got there. But did you change some of it? <0>__<0>
Comment by MonsterBabies: May 27, 2008 7:59 pm
I can't shake the feeling that you butchered some part of it.... i'm hunting you down tommrow and checking.... you better run.
Comment by MonsterBabies: May 30, 2008 3:50 pm
Ok... Open smile
Comment by DeVdoll343: May 27, 2008 8:20 pm
this is SO beautiful! I really admire your work.
Comment by UnderUmbrellas: May 28, 2008 8:56 pm
Thanks guys! No sam i didnt change any of it ><
Comment by MonsterBabies: Jun 2, 2008 2:37 pm
Haha omg that face is so creepy!


Comment by oceanreverie: Jun 26, 2008 8:44 pm
this is a really great poem. i recently wrote something with the same concept; me writing/talking to myself. its a great way to really sit back and look at who you are and who you've become. great job, this is an awesome piece
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