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days go by

day by day
night by night
hour by hour
minute by minute
second by second

my heart stopped beating the first time you made me flinch
the first time you threatened me
the first time you said 'fuck you'
the first time you said you hated me

day by day
night by night
hour by hour
minute by minute
second by second

my eyes have never been dry since
behing these words
i weep and hide
waiting for another mistake of mine
to light your fuse

day by day
night by night
hour by hour
minute by minute
second by second

i sit here and i wait..
for another day to go by
waiting for the night to creep by
waiting for my tears to dry
waiting for my heart to start beating
just waiting

by meltedsnowman
posted on 04/25/2008

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Comment by kareohline012: Apr 25, 2008 8:02 pm
thats good, but yet really sad, sorry that you feel that way, nice poem though!
Comment by loveforeverlivelonger: Apr 25, 2008 8:46 pm
wow this is deep i love how it is written. i know how you feel both my parents said they hated me but my dad was the one who would beat me and my mom would blame me she said that i took a three hundred dallor check from my aunt and well I now what it feels like alot of us do but i am here please feel free to e-mail me any time please when you need to talk to someone. okay or you can e-mail anyone but please let me know okay i am here for you
Comment by Tauntingviper: Apr 26, 2008 12:06 am
i know, i see, i feel, and i'm always here
Comment by cooper: Apr 26, 2008 12:07 am
im really sorry that you have to go through this, its not a good thing to experience. im sorry again. if you need to talk, i'm here
Comment by Korn: Apr 26, 2008 8:57 am
Your work is excellent...as for reality pray changes all things...
Comment by tobeloved: Apr 26, 2008 4:31 pm
that's sad.. i'm sorry that you're having to experience this =(
Comment by AllAlone: Apr 26, 2008 7:47 pm
i can relate. my father is like that. but, thankfully he moved out. it was a really good poem though i also wish you didn't have to experience anything like that. i hope that everything gets better for you soon.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Apr 28, 2008 7:38 am
great poem...i can relate also but instead of my dad it's my mom and her husband. i'm here if you need to talk.
Comment by fade: May 8, 2008 2:24 pm
Wow. So many people relate. You hit a topic and managed to explain it SO WELL.I LOVE the poem.
Comment by mysterygrl: May 21, 2008 11:50 am
I am so sorry thats so sad you knwo i am here for you when you need me just give me a call ok! great poem
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