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CARE

I must admit that I thought
of leaving life behind& lettin go

I was lost & alone always
Theres many ppl close by
Yet no one seems 2 care.

They say they understand
But just when I learn 2 love again
they give up.

I hold the blade close now
as tears mix in with blood
bigin 2 slowly run
Like a young chiled
i sit & cry

Knowing I could end my life
made my mind blank

I put the blade away & tried 2 wipe the blood dry
it oozes more than before.

I know suicides not the answer.
I knew there was a reason
for every thig thats gone wrong

many bad things happen
They make u forget
the good times
that u have

All the good things of life.
love & happiness

Even though life is hard
trouble is part & parsle

If u decide 2 leave life behind
maybe u will.

I promise that others
ur Mistake will haunt
& maybe even kill

by zoe
posted on 06/17/2008

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Comment by pal605427: Jun 23, 2008 6:54 pm
this is a good poem i must give you some props so lil sis hows life .....
Comment by clinxi: Jun 21, 2008 6:23 am
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Comment by unknowntruth1: Jun 18, 2008 8:10 pm
wow this is really amazing. i totally agree with the whole thing. and i know how you feel this is so deep and so true if you ever need to talk i am really here for you. id be glad to help if you ever need anything.
Comment by thefrizz: Jun 17, 2008 4:47 pm
deep dude i love it!
Comment by zoe: Jun 17, 2008 11:09 am
THANKS FOR ALL UR COMMENTS AS ALWAYS AND I HAD SOME HELP FROM CLINXISmiley
Comment by pal605427: Jul 13, 2008 1:04 pm
hey erase your inbox zoe i cnt send you anymore mail if you dont
Comment by zoe: Jul 19, 2008 1:25 pm
how sorry lyle i been lost sorry well i done big bro. sorry bout brian i need to talk soerousley lol love ya alls
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