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Burning of my soul

my subconscie is bleeding and my thoughts are fading, i feel everything holding me down cut off, im gone all my pain resurfaces, i feel burning from the inside, , a raising pain that slowly consumes my body with unimaginable rage, i look aroudn for some kind of relief, to this blinding pain, and there you stood, with your back to mine, your hands lay on my face like the hands of the dead, my pain numbs and i can see

by vonsweeny
posted on 08/07/2009

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Comment by AnitaLyn: Aug 8, 2009 10:54 pm
Strange, but me having MS this poem reminded me of the pain I suffer from. I'm sure that's NOT what it's about, but it touched my heart.
THANK YOU
Comment by vonsweeny: Aug 9, 2009 12:28 pm
your welcome, ur right its not about ms but its really however you wanna take it, im glad u liked it
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