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Burning Love

Would you mind if I said I love you
Would you ignore me and leave
Do you encourage me to say it
Or should I lock it inside and weep
The burning heat would hurt me deep
My inside has all melted and disappeared
I have to open the door and let it out
I have to tell you how I truly feel
Would you hate me if I frankly said
And leave me like you past did
I am so scared to open the door
But your love is causing a tragedy
It’s chocking my heart to death
And draining my veins to the end

by SingingHeart
posted on 01/05/2008

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Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 6, 2008 12:58 am
good poem and i think you should tell him...it's the best way to find out how he feels.
Comment by pmaravelias: Jan 6, 2008 5:47 am
nice
Comment by Lordharrison: Jan 6, 2008 10:55 am
Wow, love how you got your emotions down there. Tell him.
Comment by loveme77: Jan 7, 2008 9:04 am
wow, there's emotion in every single word. I think you should tell him, no doubt. I love it. very nice Smiley
Comment by Tequilla: Jan 7, 2008 9:54 am
I like this...it's really good. Good poem.
Comment by GirlNextDoor: Jan 12, 2008 7:43 pm
great poem
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