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Broken Path

I'm stuck inside these memories
And drowning in these tears
I'm living in my nightmares
Still haunted by my fears
I walk along this broken path
It's paved with broken dreams
It's washed with fallen tears
And dried with silent screams
Nothing's going to change at all
Because faith has lost its way
At least I'm not the only one
Who walked on it today

by Snoman
posted on 09/12/2009

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Comments: 40
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Comment by Psychobabble: Sep 29, 2009 6:40 pm
Amazing, i loved it.
Comment by Snoman: Sep 19, 2009 2:39 pm
oh my goodness im so mad right now!!! somebody took my poem? that makes me very mad >Sad face im not exactly sure what to do Sad face its never happened before Sad face

well this is what i posted on that site...

"Chris Messer (9/19/2009 4:38:00 PM)
| Delete this message
Do you make it a habbit to steal my poems?

My name is chris messer, and this poem is my original work written and posted on poemofquotes on 9/12/2009
I find this act very disrespectful to my work and i would appreciate it if you removed it immediately.
I'm not sure who you think you are, or what you think you're doing, but as far as i'm concerned you're a talentless nobody who's resorted to theivery. My only wish now is that you get what you deserve.


hmmm doesn't this look familiar? i sure think so...
http: //www.poemofquotes.com/members/sad-poetry/broken_path-564755907
"

im not entirely sure if i handled that properly, and i'm not sure how to get my poem removed from that site under her name...

any advice?
please help Sad face
Comment by sassicat: Sep 15, 2009 1:33 pm
awww this is an amazing poem! good job Smiley
Comment by deep: Sep 13, 2009 2:46 am
very good one ..
Comment by Atwood: Sep 12, 2009 4:22 am
no. you aren't.
Comment by AngelShadow: Sep 12, 2009 9:32 am
Wow this is amazing so relatable 5 out of 5 stars! Amazing the whole thing took my breathe away the flow is so good and the wors choice is breathtaking! Wonderful job! AMAZING!
Comment by NicholasScott: Sep 12, 2009 2:07 am
You know what, it's been a long time since i've read one your poems that's THIS good! dude i wanna bash the crap out of it but i don't know where to start...
AHHHHHH i hate you....

pineapple? what? who? where? uhhhh.... hey look a distraction *points in random direction then runs away*
Comment by Uncertain: Sep 12, 2009 2:10 am
this is REALY good, keep it up Smiley
Comment by FluckTard: Sep 12, 2009 2:14 am
Im new 2 this site...
aint got around to postin sum poems yet but daaaaaaaaamn dude this is hella sick...
i gotta tell u rogue this is the shite man...


and note to my brotha above me... rogue i'll scrape you in a game of ball! unh cuz what now!!!
plus my comment is hella better!!! fluck you!!! and yo couch!!!
Comment by deejay: Sep 12, 2009 3:26 am
WOW.

That poem packed a punch!

Short, sharp, simple. Soo effective!

Brilliant!
Comment by scarredemotions17: Sep 12, 2009 7:57 am
that was a beautiful poem and i loved it. short but it was definitely worth reading. and i did in fact enjoy
Comment by paxson00: Sep 12, 2009 8:22 am
you have no idea how great this is.
Comment by PerpetualLover: Sep 12, 2009 3:16 pm
wow great, very natural and understanding!
Comment by MsKeys1707: Sep 12, 2009 3:10 pm
wow this is amazing... very deep and i can feel the emotion in every line.. I love it
Comment by ninasworld: Sep 12, 2009 4:25 pm
this is so damn good
it leaves me speechless
i wish i can be good as you
keep it up
Comment by broken3heart3: Sep 12, 2009 4:46 pm
beautiful
Comment by solonely: Sep 12, 2009 8:51 pm
ok wow this is a wonderfully written poem, great job.
Comment by Heartbroken120: Sep 13, 2009 6:54 am
WOW! this is amazing. itz filled with so much emotion. it is simply a beautiful poem. i loved it!
Comment by sion: Sep 13, 2009 12:18 pm
there are many walking along side you...you´re not alone on this. I can relate...very nicely done
Comment by Snoman: Sep 13, 2009 1:25 pm
I'm so glad so many people read this... it means a lot to me Smiley thank you
Comment by justanotherperson: Sep 14, 2009 2:05 pm
very nice
Comment by mel725: Sep 15, 2009 4:38 am
very good
Comment by GreshamGirl09: Sep 15, 2009 9:41 am
yea that was pretty good...
Comment by SilentStorm: Sep 16, 2009 4:41 pm
oh wow BUMPIN dat poem had a good flow & yea i kno wat u mean this poem was very cool beans
Comment by noname: Sep 17, 2009 4:44 am
nice poem
Comment by PrettyOdd: Sep 18, 2009 10:41 am
You wrote it on the spot? Bullshit.
You copy and pasted it.

http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/broken-path-4/

Take it down.
Comment by PrettyOdd: Sep 18, 2009 10:51 am
Ooh, holy crap. My bad. She posted it after you. So it seems as though someone's stolen your poem.
...Unless you're also posing as a 21 year old Polish girl named 'Aleksandra Lachut'.
Sorry about that. I just get angry when I see some form of plagiarism.
Comment by Sbrennan2: Sep 19, 2009 2:32 am
I'd say fair enough mistake Sticking tongue out
Nice work on the poem ;)
Comment by Tinkerbellpixie: Sep 19, 2009 7:45 am
Nice poem. I enjoyed it very much.
Comment by Snoman: Sep 19, 2009 2:55 pm
I understand that you reacted to the alleged plagiarism, but please try to be more carefull before you accuse me.

I was shocked and hurt at the accusation.

but thank you for bringing this to my attention
Comment by Snoman: Sep 20, 2009 3:20 pm
my poem is mine once again Smiley

a special thanks to PrettyOdd for bringing it to my attention
and to beautifuldisaster for helping get my poem back Smiley

i couldn't have done it without you both Smiley
Comment by NeverAReason: Sep 23, 2009 6:57 am
aww i loved it Sad face
Comment by kenMGMT: Sep 27, 2009 6:08 pm
snoman check mine out bud somewhat simlar. good short poem!
Comment by kenMGMT: Sep 27, 2009 6:08 pm
http://www.poemofquotes.com/members/inspirational-poetry/stife_of_life
Comment by AshleyHalliwell: Oct 2, 2009 3:25 pm
Omg, that was absolutely beautiful. This poem really speaks to me and I am totally in love with it. Great job.
Comment by jimbo85: Oct 2, 2009 7:16 pm
awesome!!!
Comment by Shobana: Oct 6, 2009 2:45 am
Terrific work..
Short and sweet..
Keep going..
Comment by Iridescent: Oct 14, 2009 10:29 am
wamazing work good job
Comment by Morior: Oct 25, 2009 11:12 pm
Wow this is amazing work
Comment by HeartbrokenEmo: Oct 29, 2009 9:42 pm
This is Beautiful
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