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Borrowed Angels

Their so bright, and they feel so much more.
They touch your heart in ways no one has done before.
Their love is sweeter, and in their eyes they show to give you the very best.
Their giggles make our lives so blest.
So why do they, in return go so soon?.
Angels with the most beautiful souls I heard someone say on a full moon.

They must be borrowed angels, here with us in life.
They make everything seem rosy and bright.
Sometimes sadly their Heaven sent,
And sometimes...Heaven needs them back again.

They look so deep within you, they can see your soul.
And even when they leave you know you'll never let go.
The sky seems bluer and the grass is a rich, forest green.
The little angel's work has been done, it seems.

It's okay to cry, you've lost something dear.
But remember that the angel will always be near.
It's looking down from Heaven upon you, with such bliss.
And in the winds it sends down a little kiss.
It's sad for them to go, but their Heaven sent.
And sometimes, Heaven needs them back again.

by PrayForMe
posted on 01/06/2008

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Comment by thegurlat410: Jun 24, 2008 3:24 am
its beautiful...no more no less, i feel the pain every day but poems like this touch me deeply
Comment by oceansoul: Jun 23, 2008 4:29 am
It's soo good!!! You are already a poet-if you can write so well that you touch someone's soul then you're a poet-and you touched my soul with your poem!Go On!
Comment by oceansoul: Jun 23, 2008 4:29 am
It's soo good!!! You are already a poet-if you can write so well that you touch someone's soul then you're a poet-and you touched my soul with your poem!Go On!
Comment by SadGirl96: Jan 6, 2008 11:33 pm
Omg...Omg!.....This is the most beautiful poem I have ever read...It's so sad btu sooo good!.
Vote up! *tears*
Comment by PrayForMe: Jan 7, 2008 12:08 am
Thank you! Smiley
Comment by sweetxdreamsXOXO: Jan 7, 2008 12:53 am
Wow. =] That really just made me smile. I love it.
Comment by jasonfoolio: Jan 7, 2008 1:40 am
this is one amazing. poem.
and thats comming from a pretty good writer =]=] .
Comment by footprints: Jan 7, 2008 4:11 am
This is beautiful. I also lost a pregnancy and can identify with this. I love the imagery of the last stanza. (You may need to check their vs they're though). Thanks for sharing.
Comment by StarGirl09: Jan 7, 2008 9:00 am
This is really good
Comment by missingmom: Jan 7, 2008 9:02 am
I "lost" a grandchild, 3 days before Christmas, I too wrote a poem about it. All babies are precious angels sent to us from heaven. When we lose them, they are never really lost to us, they have just gone back home and we will be reunited with them again some day when we are called back home too. I'm sorry for your families loss and hope you find comfort knowing that your little Angel Babies are smiling down on you from heaven.
Comment by loveme77: Jan 7, 2008 9:08 am
wow. That was amazing, it made me tear up. I have a 18 month old godchild, and when he was born, he has a hole in his heart and had to go into surgery. I feel your pain, and everyone else does too. Great job, feel better.
Comment by lost_girl15: Jan 7, 2008 11:05 am
sad but awsome poem. it has such great emotion. i love it!!!
Comment by R3DandBLACKstars: Jan 7, 2008 2:20 pm
wow...this is beautiful.
i have tears in my eyes cuz it makes me think of my dog.
he died. it gets me really sad.

this is amazing.
Comment by aqua4ever: Jan 7, 2008 2:24 pm
THIS IS AMAZING. Very wow. I just love it.
Comment by aqua4ever: Jan 7, 2008 2:24 pm
THIS IS AMAZING. Very wow. I just love it.
Comment by aqua4ever: Jan 7, 2008 2:24 pm
O i forgot but vote up.
Comment by shadowofasoul: Jan 7, 2008 3:09 pm
this is....wow...amazing does this poem no justice... made me cry..... . . . .
Comment by bleedingheart: Jan 7, 2008 3:53 pm
It gave me goose bumps. Vote up!
Comment by UpAgainstTheWall: Jan 7, 2008 8:34 pm
Amazing!!
Loved it.
Keep writing.
Comment by bubbles20257: Jan 7, 2008 11:40 pm
Wow, this is so amazing. I recently lost a baby myself, so i can so relate to this. Its a lovely poem that has touched my heart and made me cry!
Comment by oOSilentSoulOo: Jan 8, 2008 3:40 am
aaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwww!!!!!! *crys crys crys crys*

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just can't stop!
It's so cute!
So Amazing!
So wonderful!
I love it!
That is absolutly my favorite poem!!!!!
oOSilentSoulOo
Comment by babytee33: Jan 8, 2008 4:29 am
Hey,

This poem made me thnk about my friend who had a miscarriage last year, and a baby that died at our church last year, she was 22 months old her older brother(6) gave her a pretzel and she choked on it ad drowned in her vomit. Everyone at the church misses her and she really was an angel. I feel your pain.

This poem made me cry but it also made me happy to know that little Brooke is in a better place.

Wonderful, wonderful poem, just amazing!
Comment by urabaka: Jan 8, 2008 10:39 am
Wow very nice Smiley
Comment by BrokenHeartedGurl: Jan 8, 2008 12:07 pm
oh my goodness... that is very emotional... i loved it!
Comment by ShelbyBoo: Jan 8, 2008 2:53 pm
Thats beautifull!!
Comment by xHeartxBrokenx: Jan 8, 2008 3:49 pm
Wow that is one of the best poems i have ever read in my life i love it!!
Comment by swanprincess: Jan 8, 2008 6:21 pm
wow.. its very touching.
Comment by Darryn732: Jan 8, 2008 6:43 pm
wow Smiley Beautiful message, Great Poem
Comment by SingingHeart: Jan 8, 2008 7:59 pm
You are such a great person that had the chance to meet two innocent angels from heaven, i know its really sad to lose them, but that revived great emotions in your heart to write such a great poem.. God Bless You
Comment by moonlight: Jan 8, 2008 8:12 pm
wow that was a wonderful poem very beautiful and touching i loved it!
Comment by juicey145: Jan 9, 2008 8:38 am
this is amazing. i love it sooo much. =]
Comment by Waterblaze3234: Jan 9, 2008 12:44 pm
omg that was the greatest poem! it was beautiful i think i cried out of joy inside!!! it was incredible!!! Smiley
Comment by jasonfoolio: Jan 9, 2008 6:29 pm
i think the angels gave you a much broader sence on writing poerty... and with their help you wrote an amazing poem.
Comment by EmoPoetry: Jan 10, 2008 4:28 pm
HA! =D
Love it! =]
Comment by oceanreverie: Jan 10, 2008 7:00 pm
this poem is really beautiful, im sorry for your loss. you really have talent.
Comment by landrysmommy: Jan 10, 2008 10:54 pm
really good
Comment by landrysmommy: Jan 10, 2008 10:54 pm
really good
Comment by pleasetakecareofmyheart: Jan 11, 2008 5:49 am
it was very touching
Comment by beautifulxhjfxdisaster: Jan 11, 2008 8:11 am
good poem =]]
Comment by emogothjen: Jan 11, 2008 1:20 pm
awwww, that was sooooo sweet! it nearly made me cry! (and me being goth, that's hard to do lol.)
Comment by unwanted: Jan 11, 2008 4:02 pm
good
Comment by EmotionalReck07: Jan 11, 2008 10:28 pm
bootiful Smiley
Comment by Brighenti: Jan 12, 2008 10:43 am
Very well written, keep it up Open smile
Comment by solonely: Jan 14, 2008 8:17 am
i had to hold back the tears i loved it
Comment by GiveMeU: Jan 14, 2008 10:29 am
Great job. Beautiful poem. I love it! Open smile
Comment by truckergirl14: Jan 14, 2008 11:01 am
sad but awsome poem. it has such great emotion. i love it!!!
Comment by kayla: Jan 15, 2008 6:23 am
beautiful poemSmiley
Comment by christi823: Jan 17, 2008 8:26 am
Beautiful. ;]
Comment by tinkie: Jan 17, 2008 10:37 pm
reminds me of people i ahve known and lost. thank you.
Comment by DarkNate: Jan 18, 2008 10:55 am
thank you for writing this, it really hit me hard. *tears*
Comment by tobeloved: Jan 18, 2008 5:03 pm
really great poem, very sad, it reminded me of people i have lost, you have lots of talent keep up the great work Smiley
Comment by cwagnon: Jan 18, 2008 7:35 pm
Awsome
Comment by virtualbubblewrap: Jan 19, 2008 10:22 am
wow this poem made the hairs on the back of my neck stick straight up great job this poem is so...wow...uh im speachless great poem!
Comment by fallenangelx14: Jan 23, 2008 11:09 am
wonderful, beautiful, amazing, everything great i could possibly say about this is what it is. Basicly its one of the most amazing things ive ever read in my entire life. keep it up! its perfect :]
Comment by queenie: Jan 27, 2008 10:57 am
absolutely breath taking
Comment by shirotora: Jan 29, 2008 6:21 am
absolutley beautiful, you should be really proud of what you've written.
great job.
Comment by Poison: Jan 29, 2008 10:54 am
very beautiful
Comment by teardrops: Jan 30, 2008 1:17 pm
very good it is so great
Comment by Penny: Feb 1, 2008 12:08 am
holy crap. MAJOR PROPS. that is seriously amazing.
Comment by Syrinx: Feb 1, 2008 11:17 am
That is freakin' Amnazing.
Comment by Yadira: Feb 2, 2008 9:20 am
this is really deep.
i love this poem =]
Comment by forevergone1790: Feb 8, 2008 12:15 pm
Very Good!!!
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Feb 13, 2008 8:36 am
yes very good
Comment by Clvisugo: Feb 21, 2008 12:41 am
That is really sweet! My brothers first baby was born sleeping, and even though you never spend a lot of (of if any) precious "living" time with them, it still doesn't make the pain any easier!

Beautiful Smiley
Comment by Maya: Feb 22, 2008 7:42 pm
OMG! this poem made me cry i love it!! Your an awesome poet! I REALLY and TRULY mean it!
Comment by ashuhhland: Jun 27, 2008 9:03 pm
i love this poem. im so sorry though.
Comment by asimpledeath: Mar 4, 2008 9:47 am
I love this poem. It was really touching. It made me think of my past!!!
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Mar 10, 2008 10:07 am
amazing
Comment by wwwdotcom: Mar 10, 2008 7:36 pm
simply perfect poetry
Comment by Willieam: Mar 12, 2008 6:25 am
wow!

can u vote for peoms
?
Comment by meltedsnowman: Mar 12, 2008 9:37 am
wow that was really pretty
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Mar 13, 2008 7:34 am
i really do love this poem
Comment by deathmonkey: Mar 16, 2008 11:09 am
I'm not religious in anyway and this made me smile at the hidden truth in it all
Comment by meganlilly: Mar 22, 2008 8:57 pm
this was really sad.

good poem tho.

im sorry 4 ur losses.
Comment by kadcbn69: Mar 26, 2008 4:54 pm
Sad face
Comment by poetryismusic: Mar 29, 2008 8:54 am
wow...beautiful yet sad.
Comment by dakotadarcy: Apr 8, 2008 2:00 pm
That is really lovely as im sure you already know = ] x
Comment by xcrabsxrxnotxfoodx: Apr 11, 2008 7:59 am
that's a good poem sort of sad but still good
Comment by sytycdlike3rinn: Apr 21, 2008 6:07 pm
This is so creative, it really shows how we can have "borrowed angels". I really like this poem, excellent job with it!
Comment by SPAGACKULA: Apr 29, 2008 3:41 am
A excellent expression of wisdom and knowledge.
Great work Thanks for sharing what you know is true.
Comment by emsue11392: May 2, 2008 10:39 am
AMASING!!!!!!
you are really really good!!!!
comment mine please!!!!
Comment by Nickole: Jun 12, 2008 9:31 am
this is amazing it made me think of my auntie...god rest her soul
Comment by friendZdogZ: Jun 14, 2008 2:20 pm
i know the feeling. this is a really beautiful poem, truly amazing, wonderful. love it!
Comment by romantichomicide: Sep 29, 2008 8:51 am
like it
Comment by lotsofstuff321: Oct 3, 2008 5:43 am
nice Smiley
Comment by sweetbloodyangel: Oct 15, 2008 8:44 am
i really loved this poem. im srry for your lost. i recently lost my baby.i was only 6 months. so i feel your pain. and your peom relates to how i feel right now.
Comment by cutiepie: Oct 16, 2008 10:30 am
really great poem
Comment by ArcAngel: Nov 6, 2008 9:30 am
AWESOME!!!
(the only description of this poem)
Comment by angelheart16: Nov 6, 2008 5:56 pm
wow, that's beautiful, my heart is trying not to cry, it was beating so fast, you've made me think about things so different, and i thankyou for writing this poem
Comment by jealousara: Nov 9, 2008 5:26 pm
so beautiful
Comment by ManicMell: Nov 13, 2008 9:43 pm
wow! Just Wow
Comment by christi823: Nov 19, 2008 8:34 am
I agree with angelheart16.

I love this poem, so much.
As I was reading it, it sent pangs of heartache through me, and that hasn't ever happened to me whilst reading something before.

Your work is beautiful, and I'm very sorry for your loss.

High hopes to you. [:
Comment by bigfatlies: Nov 21, 2008 9:59 am
Beautiful Smiley
Comment by livelife: Jan 1, 2009 6:27 pm
really great job. Nice reading..
Comment by LightestShadow: Jan 3, 2009 4:54 pm
undiscribealbel, but in a beautiful, and amazing way!
i give you a vote up
Comment by Angel: Jan 6, 2009 11:37 am
great poem (>")>
Comment by ForgottenMemory: Feb 8, 2009 1:53 pm
It's a beautiful poem!
Comment by ForgottenMemory: Feb 8, 2009 1:53 pm
It's a beautiful poem!
Comment by ASHLEYJ: Sep 1, 2010 1:02 pm
AWW..IT WAS Sad face...BUT I LUVVV ITTT....SO Smiley

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