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Abstinence Grants Sight.
Who did you creep from
To wind around me?
Do you think to indulge
Is to set your mind free?
Roll.
Where do you travel
From our very last?
You shall dull us all
From this dust that I cast.
Light.
The mind still begs
Its jitters at bay,
To crawl and consume
All of us that it may.
Ash.
Take my loved ones;
Take them by the breath.
Shall I call them?
I’d call them love at death.
by Adele
posted on 11/06/2009
To wind around me?
Do you think to indulge
Is to set your mind free?
Roll.
Where do you travel
From our very last?
You shall dull us all
From this dust that I cast.
Light.
The mind still begs
Its jitters at bay,
To crawl and consume
All of us that it may.
Ash.
Take my loved ones;
Take them by the breath.
Shall I call them?
I’d call them love at death.
by Adele
posted on 11/06/2009
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Comment by Telemachus: Nov 8, 2009 2:30 pm
How do you turn a bright person into a boring one - feed 'em weed.
As always this is beautifully done. Real poetry in its economy, rich language and refined structure. And I love the last line - the power of the simple.
Comment by PrettyOdd: Nov 8, 2009 2:54 pm
I read this the day you posted it, and I meant to comment on how much I love it, but I was distracted.
I'm a little sad to see only one comment for this, though. Personally, I think it's brilliant.
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Nov 9, 2009 5:58 am
Who did you creep from
To wind around me?
Once i read that i knew i was going to enjoy this.
I have collected together all the evidence i can find that weed is good and healthy...now where did i put it...
Comment by beautifuldisaster: Nov 9, 2009 10:17 am
Who did you creep from
To wind around me?
Do you think to indulge
Is to set your mind free?
I loved it!
Just... loved it!
Vote up!
Comment by NotSoPoetic: Nov 9, 2009 11:09 am
Quite Vivid. It could pertain to many things in our livesComment by BlackbookPast: Nov 9, 2009 11:11 am
very good write.
Believe it or not...through that cloudy haze...I can actually remember who it crept to me from, but I can never seem to remember where I put my car keys...hahaha!!
After years in the haze, it can be a boring ride when your endorphins no longer release.
Clear, but boring.