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a wish you should miss

some times people wish,
they had never been born,
but people would miss,
feelings that were torn.

the world shouldnt be,
all happiness and rainbows,
what would we see,
between you and me

by krazyk
posted on 03/19/2008

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Comment by babyboogt82886: Mar 19, 2008 6:04 am
wow, i really like this, thank you! Smiley
Comment by tobeloved: Mar 19, 2008 6:28 am
wow.. i really like it!! it's really well written! Smiley keep writing.
Comment by lilphat15: Mar 19, 2008 6:35 am
wow dat was deep i really liked it Smiley
Comment by AFireInYourEyes18: Mar 19, 2008 6:56 am
wow thats really deep... i gotta say.. it makes you think
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Mar 19, 2008 7:26 am
wow.....deep and makes me think.....good job
Comment by MsKeys1707: Mar 19, 2008 9:23 am
this is amazingSmileySmileySmiley
Comment by krazyk: Mar 19, 2008 9:47 am
thanx everyone you all are so niceSmiley
Comment by henrie: Mar 19, 2008 12:15 pm
I love rhyming poems Smiley this really made me think Smiley
Comment by kitten546: Mar 19, 2008 4:05 pm
awsome!!SmileySmiley
Comment by thestewardofgondor: Mar 20, 2008 7:56 am
umm yeah.. dunno what to think about it.. difficult...
its good yeah
Comment by StillHoping: Mar 20, 2008 11:33 am
amazing !
Comment by OverTheRainbow: Mar 20, 2008 1:44 pm
Nice poem Kayla!!!! I'm sooo glad I got you to join this site! Keep up the good workSmiley

Can someone read one of mine? I need some opinions on themSmiley
Comment by krazyk: Mar 20, 2008 6:53 pm
thanx you guys are all so niceSmileySmileySmileySmileySmileySmileySmileySmileySmileySmileySmileySmileySmileySmiley
Comment by starrynight001: Mar 21, 2008 1:08 am
nice poem it really gets people thinking and going Smiley
Comment by AngelicallyBroken: Mar 23, 2008 5:39 pm
i like this,very good.short and simple but very complexed at the same time.
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