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A Soul to Rest

She lays drenched with pain
So cold and Barely covered
With not a soul for comfort
The Moon above her Hovered

She reaches out towards the light
To let the warmth within
Her fragile face withdrawn
A world with atrocious sin

Her once life filled with laughter
Melts beneath the planks
The memories of her loved ones
Fading into blank

She chose to follow the path
Of her lover late one night
Her footprints washed away
She fades without a sight

Those she left behind
Prayed with sorrow tears that night
In hope their precious loved one
Returned by Morning Light

That night they made sweet love
Engaged her in his hands
Unaware the mind of her lover
Had a devious,ferocious plan

With force he kissed her lips
Endorsed her to the ground
He pierced the blade towards her throat
As her heart rapidly pounds

He carves the blade upon her chest
Engraves her name in vain
He slips the blade which cuts his wrist
blood drips upon her name..

Her lover leaves the scene
The moonlight shone above
She never thought her life would end
In the arms of the man she loved

Deep inside a foggy mist
Beneath a Willow Tree
The lost,Dying,Helpless Girl
Lays very quietly

She stares into the light
"Let thy lover feel thy Pain"
allow my soul to rest
He left bloodstains on my name..

Her body bruised and beaten
She takes one final breath
And fades into the moonlight
Her soul is all thats left.

She was found the following day
Beneath a tree she layed
With Bloonstains of her lover
His Death is set that day

She Gazes towards the Light
Her soul must now depart
The golden gates of heaven
Will keep her safe at heart.




by Kiam
posted on 06/01/2009

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Comments: 29
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Comment by Reece: Jul 28, 2009 4:24 am
Speechless This is amazing!
Comment by FRANKDARK: Jun 10, 2009 10:22 am
i had to read it again
its just that good keep
up the good work=]
Comment by kazedragon: Jun 27, 2009 9:53 pm
This is really good, but it's really sad too...
Comment by LostInDarkness: Jun 1, 2009 6:44 am
This is a sad poem and well written. great job.
Voted up.
Comment by SolitaryRavenSoul: Jun 1, 2009 7:25 am
beautifully written...
Comment by Mandy: Jun 1, 2009 12:08 pm
wow great poem
Comment by toria13: Jun 1, 2009 6:54 pm
wow!
ur a very good writer
Comment by SelestriaCrystal: Jun 1, 2009 10:25 pm
its really good, but so sad =(
Comment by Duckie: Jun 2, 2009 10:12 am
oh my gosh! your poem is amazing! its so sad but its so good!
Comment by khaleel: Jun 2, 2009 10:48 am
great one
Comment by kaliiii4: Jun 2, 2009 12:56 pm
oh my god.
this song is so sad but yet it is so amazing
Comment by ColdHeartedPoet: Jun 2, 2009 6:06 pm
Wow... this is amazing. I'm stunned. One of my favourites. It's described so well you just get this image in your mind. Absolutely wonderful! =D
Comment by becca8: Jun 4, 2009 7:16 am
oh wow... this is amazing.
Comment by Luv4shelly: Jun 4, 2009 1:20 pm
this is amazing, I must agree^^^
Comment by striker: Jun 4, 2009 6:41 pm
beautiful poem utterly amazing
Comment by Kiam: Jun 4, 2009 7:58 pm
thankyou so much for all your comments, xoxox
Comment by unsocial329: Jun 5, 2009 6:56 am
Oh, oh my god. I did NOT expect that. I'm glad I read Smiley I have goosebumps now. Voting up. Please keep writing, never stop.
Comment by KAS: Jul 7, 2009 12:05 pm
DANG
Comment by watever76: Jun 6, 2009 10:31 am
wow amazing ...
Comment by Angelsvoice: Jun 6, 2009 3:24 pm
good lord...this is amazing. its probably one of my favorites that ive read. very very very very elegantly done..just simply amazing.
Comment by NiceGuysLoveBetter: Jun 7, 2009 8:18 pm
Nice picturing, good wording.
Comment by sohailis: Jun 7, 2009 11:27 pm
That was a great poem and really sad, it just puts an image of them in your head.
Comment by FRANKDARK: Jun 9, 2009 7:57 pm
its a really good poem
i really enjoyed it
Comment by connie: Jun 11, 2009 5:28 pm
keep up the great work
Comment by crazy8s: Jun 11, 2009 7:03 pm
wow i now declare this poem my favorite...its amazing and sad
Comment by MyDearTiannaMarie: Jun 12, 2009 2:01 am
Sad
Comment by PerpetualNature: Jun 19, 2009 5:41 pm
Amazing!!!
Comment by Kiam: Jun 23, 2009 1:10 am
thanks u fullaz much appreciated, thanks for all your guys comments.
Comment by NOangelsLEFT: Jul 12, 2009 10:09 am
this is amazing, you are very talented ...
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