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~~ Raising MY Voice ~~


I scream; I shout;
A'll I want ,
To be heard.
I shake; I bleed
Forgiveness isnt Greed.
A Tear; I Fear,
that i am loved and still
alone.
I hurt ; I feed
of which this cant be...
that i am happy but alone in
misary.
To watch; To stare;
Please do not bare,
this emptyness i hold so dear
of which I cannot see;
For u blind me.
I loved and feel
I've faild your love,
For i make mistakes
and i cannot erase;
this horror that i put on this
town.
So I cried ; I wiped away
this blood from my face;
and hopfuly find this peace
that you talk about in dreams.
For this horror of a life
can be healed,
but who can heal a
broken soul?
To love and be free
to love and care for;
the one i love.
This is whats on my mind
to write and wish
that i can love;
Myself.





BY : Dawn Burgess

by FallenAngel666
posted on 10/25/2009

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Comment by Fathom: Oct 25, 2009 12:33 pm
I actually like this poem. However, try to type in in Word, first... helps with spelling errors.

PS: A good written poem is better with no mistakes in it.
Comment by stainedwithblood: Oct 25, 2009 4:01 pm
Pretty.
Comment by xmyxlastxbreathx: Oct 25, 2009 10:54 pm
Very nice. Aside from some spelling errors, I like it a lot! Smiley
Comment by KyleeLove: Dec 27, 2009 6:47 pm
Ummm. Okayish. I didn't enjoy as well as some others..Sad face
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