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...darkness inside (Song)

Give unto me optimism and happiness
Make me strong

[Guitar harmonization]

I need reprieve…

A life like this is something I never wanted
Everything is so hard and everything seems in vain
Like I’m trying for nothing at all
And I feel like I’m worthless…
But lots of people have my back
So I don’t understand why I feel like that
Maybe I expect too much
Or maybe I just think too much
But why all the time?
All the time… I feel sad…
Why?

[Snare drum solo]

There is darkness inside
Darkness resides inside
There is darkness inside
Darkness resides inside
There is darkness inside
Darkness resides inside…

Alone… waiting…

[Instrumental outro]

by PoemWritingGuy
posted on 05/08/2008

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Comment by kayla: May 9, 2008 1:16 am
Cool song, sounds like this person needs to have a different type of conversation with them selvesSmiley
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: May 9, 2008 2:01 am
Hmm, probably.

Thanks for the comment. Smiley

P.S. From 'I need reprieve...' to 'Why?' are spoken word vocals by me, and there are some in the first part of this pair as well. Everything else, though, is sung by our vocalist, and he also sings some of what I say in the background. Just saying to give you an idea of what these songs are like.
Comment by Darryn732: May 9, 2008 3:18 pm
cool song, being a singer this sounds great Smiley Well done
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: May 10, 2008 6:59 am
You sing? That's cool. Smiley

Thanks for the comment, Darryn. Smiley
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