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_.+*Death Angel*+._

Though I fly...
My wings are broken...
I Wish to die...
With words unspoken...

No more words...
No more tears...
Everything hurts...
Everything fears...

Let me die...
So I can fly...
Back to that place...
where I found grace...
The place I belong to...
A place where I can hide...
To hide my feelings for you...
To forget that once you lied...

I've tried to fly away for so long...
Somewhere I can rest in peace...
I realized that it was wrong...
Cuz my feelings didn't decrease...

I did just the same you did long ago...
first flown away, then came back again...
There's just one thing I want to know...
Why did you pretend to be my friend?

If you really have been a friend of mine...
You've never tried to go...
But you left me here, no, I'm not fine!
Is this something you'd rather know?

Well... now that you're finally gone...
Now that you walked out of my life...
Remember that I've never been someone...
Cuz I was there, when you took that knife...
I told you it's better you won't set this cut...
But you looked at me and asked me: "so what?"
I told you "You're throwing your life away!"
and you said to me: "if this's all you've got to say...
I will set this cut and bleed till the end...
This angel will die and a new one'll be sent!"

oOSilentSoulOo

by oOSilentSoulOo
posted on 12/14/2007

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Comment by Sauvignon: Dec 14, 2007 4:07 am
wow, that was so beautiful...
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Dec 14, 2007 4:44 am
Very good. I'm in awe of the emotion. Vote up.
Comment by PrayForMe: Dec 14, 2007 10:09 am
This is amazing and beautiful...Smiley
Excellent job.
Comment by cowboylover: Dec 14, 2007 10:47 am
OMG! i cryed while reading it! amazing work. great craftsmanship!
Comment by shatterdxXxseasons: Dec 14, 2007 11:08 am
wow...that is very beautiful.
Comment by MyMisery: Dec 14, 2007 11:12 am
very good i luc it
Comment by LostInside: Dec 14, 2007 12:32 pm
so sad but very good
(*cry,cry,tear,tear*)
Comment by unknown: Dec 14, 2007 12:45 pm
great poem.
Comment by starrynight001: Dec 14, 2007 4:15 pm
wow! this is a very strong beautiful poem!
Comment by sweetxdreamsXOXO: Dec 16, 2007 5:49 am
This is full of such emotion. I adore your talents and I'm in love with the last stanza. Beautiful work. Keep writing, this will definitely get you somewhere in the future. You've got a great talent, use it wisely.
Comment by leadme2temptation: Dec 16, 2007 7:25 am
good poem
Comment by MysticFog: Dec 22, 2007 6:04 pm
wow great poem
Comment by christi823: Jan 17, 2008 9:52 am
GREAT POEM!!!
^_^
I loved it!!
It was beautiful, and I could feel the emotions!
*Voted up.*
^_^ :]
Comment by christi823: Jan 17, 2008 9:54 am
GREAT POEM!!!
^_^
I loved it!!
It was beautiful, and I could feel the emotions!
*Voted up.*
^_^ :]
Comment by tobeloved: Jan 19, 2008 2:46 pm
great poem, you've got talent, keep it up.. voting upSmiley
Comment by fallenangel6636: Mar 25, 2008 7:53 am
its a great poem
Comment by fallenangel6636: Mar 25, 2008 7:53 am
its a great poem
Comment by hiddeninblood: Apr 7, 2008 10:02 am
wow...i agree with everyone....this is freakin good poem...SmileySmileySmileySmiley
Comment by bloodypaintedart: May 29, 2008 3:36 pm
so much though feeling
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