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When The World Ends

They say that God created us, then left us
Like a clockmaker does to a clock
But you see clocks can run on their own,
So can people in a sense
But clocks enventually break,
And that's when the world will be in complete chaos

by jjxx1992
posted on 10/04/2009

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Comment by flippinthrulife17: Oct 4, 2009 9:55 am
Hmmmm...This is thought-provoking. No, I never thought about things that way. Hmm...Interesting, yeah?
Comment by BurningDesire129: Oct 4, 2009 10:43 am
Very deep and sorta dark but I liked it good work
Comment by HappyGoLucky: Nov 4, 2009 7:53 pm
I have to love it cause you used my favorite word, "chaos", but that is a great poem. The first two lines are awsome. One question though, when the clocks break, is that being compared to individual human death or something else? I could see it going both ways. Just curious.
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