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Whats In A Tear?

It comes unannounced,
Without Invitation.
You know it will be here,
Without Hesitation.
It can come as an army,
That cannot be stayed.
Or the silent abuse,
Of a single renegade.
It is not sent from,
The enemies Paladin.
It's simply forced out,
From too much emotion within
Where does emotion come from?
Where does it start?
It comes from the connection,
Between the soul, and the heart.
When too much is produced,
It soon must come out,
It cannot be released,
Through a scream or a shout.
A tear is the form
Of pure emotion
Torn from the heart
In feigned devotion.
Friend or foe?
Blessing or curse?
Keep it in? let it out?
Which one is worse?

by Alomentis
posted on 04/25/2008

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Comment by dark1angel2: Apr 25, 2008 9:38 am
i love this poem it is very creative and its gud keep it up!
Comment by loveforeverlivelonger: Apr 25, 2008 11:33 am
holy crap! it is very very creative i love this poem great job
Comment by Brighenti: Apr 25, 2008 1:58 pm
It's brilliant, I love it, great job Smiley
Comment by kareohline012: Apr 25, 2008 2:03 pm
thats a good poem, nice job!
Comment by Korn: Apr 25, 2008 2:22 pm
your writting style is very creative, I enjoy your work !
Comment by danielle: Apr 25, 2008 8:03 pm
wow!!.. did u win the contest??
Comment by Alomentis: Apr 26, 2008 2:47 am
I did win, it was a small one, but I won.
Comment by Holychild: Apr 27, 2008 11:55 am
its good that you won. this is an extravagant poem. if you dont mind i would like to put your poems into a book with minds but your poems would have your real name under them. I'll talk about this more once you become apart of my net work. God bless you.
Love&Peace:]
Comment by friendZdogZ: Apr 27, 2008 5:33 pm
wow! worsd dude! this poem rocks! it's totally awesome, man right now there aint no words i can use to describe it. it's just got me stuned
Comment by PlasticFantasy: Apr 30, 2008 5:01 pm
THIS IS AMAZING, especially for impromtu Open smile keep writing !
Comment by DarkAngel692008: May 1, 2008 12:10 pm
This is a great poem and its really true...
Comment by zoe: May 26, 2008 5:24 pm
HOLYCHILD I LIKE BOTH YALLS POEMS UR AT A TIE......Smiley
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