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What would you do?

What if I said I could turn night into day?
What if I said I could turn day into night?
What if I said that all that I say would make everything alright?
What if my words had the power to make a heart think,
And make a brain love, and make a soul come out,
And reign above the world in a way that it could never have believed were true?
What would you do?

What would you say?
If my words could turn night into day?
What if the light in my words had something to say,
And it would make the day stay,
Until what it had to say,
It said completely and true,
Until nothing was left behind in its mind.
What would you do?

What would you do if my dark had to speak,
So it went out to seek,
Someone who is humble and meek to lend it an ear,
And would not fear what it had to say?
Someone who would not fear the lack of day,
As the darkness stayed to say,
Everything that it thought in its mind to be true.
What would you do?

What would you do,
If I felt that I had to speak my mind,
Whether it was night or day?
That I had something to say,
About what I felt in my head,
And thought in my heart to be true,
And I had to say it all to you.
What would you do?

by DarkDevotions
posted on 06/11/2008

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Comment by NiceGuysLoveBetter: Jun 17, 2008 3:55 pm
This one struck me hard, related artwork in motion.
Comment by AngelFantasyMimi: Jun 16, 2008 6:10 am
Good poem.
Comment by 10000nails: Jun 16, 2008 11:04 am
I enjoyed this. The rhythmn of what if was what tickled me the most.
Comment by gothic666angel6: Jun 16, 2008 11:56 am
good poem. made me think of my b/f a little. all i could think of for an answer would be to listen. lol you are an amazing writer and still my favorite.
Comment by drkromance: Jun 11, 2008 9:29 pm
You are still amazing hun... As you always have been. =) Vote up!
Comment by babyboogt82886: Jun 12, 2008 4:50 am
Well I would ask you to be my friend! Smiley Awesome poem! Really makes you think! Smiley
Comment by greybutterfly: Jun 12, 2008 7:11 am
great poem
Comment by squirrelluver2: Jun 12, 2008 9:38 am
great poem...it's just absoluetely amazing!
Comment by Nickole: Jun 12, 2008 11:24 am
great poem
Comment by AngelicallyBroken: Jun 12, 2008 1:35 pm
great poem...you sure haven't lost your touch! =]
Comment by allstarkid: Jun 12, 2008 5:50 pm
great poem
Comment by undeadprincess: Jun 13, 2008 11:24 am
waw like waw
dats sooooo kool
Comment by mariana: Jun 14, 2008 12:44 am
Still as good as ever. its nice to see something new from you my old friend. Wish you well, blessed be, DarkDevotions.
Comment by UnsafeSanctuary: Jun 15, 2008 11:13 am
It's a thought provoker for sure, good jub on this one. The flow of it is nice and complex
Comment by lostinpoetry: Jul 2, 2008 3:12 pm
This damn good!!
Comment by creatyyvesoul122: Jul 31, 2008 2:29 pm
This is really gud dude;)
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