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Weeping Willow

Years of sorrow play,
Upon the withered tendrils,
Groaning in the wind,
Whispering sweet nothingness,
Enamoring my senses,

Beauty beyond life,
And lips that beg me closer,
Eyes that draw me near,
As your fingers pull my hair,
I wander inside deeper,

Yearning to be one,
Ascension to the climax,
Parting from the crown,
Fleeing into the hollow,
Immersing in your alcove.

by patches
posted on 02/11/2008

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Comment by HeartlessAngel: Feb 11, 2008 1:26 pm
cool poem
Comment by teardrops: Feb 11, 2008 1:32 pm
I agree with heartlessangel!!!
vote up!!!
Comment by patches: Feb 11, 2008 1:33 pm
thanks for the compliments, i really appreciate them! could you also tell me what you think its about? thanks. Smiley
Comment by jynxl337: Feb 13, 2008 6:30 pm
Well I have a hunch what this may really be about, even if that is so I still adore it ;)
Comment by oceanreverie: Feb 18, 2008 7:47 pm
ooh i know what this one is about. hahaha great poem, love the way you describe the intimacy through rustic words. hahaha
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