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Cloud Of Gloom

My body shakes
The wind whips at my feet
The sun is hidden behind dark clouds
Piles of leaves are no longer neat
My house is nothing but rubble
The fire over took it, and burnt it to the ground
The fire has gone long ago
The last I remember of my father was his chin stubble
As he looked me in the eyes and told me to run
If only he had run too;
There would be no cloud covered sun
My tear stained cheeks are cold
Rain begins to fall
Where can I go now?
It's nearing autumn's end
I can't stay outside much longer
I have a letter for my aunt to send
Maybe once she's read it; she can help me
About 2 or 3 weeks passed by
My aunt's letter arrives in the mail
It read: "Too bad, good luck in the future. Love Aunt Sammy"
How could this be?
Father always said that she wrote often and always asked about me
Turns out it was all one big lie
Maybe he did it to keep our family alive
But then that terrible fire made him die
Some people say I'm lucky to survive, but I don't think that's true
Now I have to live under this cloud of gloom.

by tobeloved
posted on 02/03/2008

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Comment by tobeloved: Feb 3, 2008 2:50 pm
this poem isn't about me. I know it's not one of the best poems, but I put it up anyway.
Comment by loveme77: Feb 4, 2008 2:48 pm
OOH! Call it 'Cloud Of Gloom'
It's great ! Aww...
Comment by tobeloved: Feb 4, 2008 4:32 pm
do you really think so? i didn't think it was one of my better ones
Comment by loveme77: Feb 5, 2008 7:45 am
YEAH! Thanks for changing the title
Comment by Tequilla: Feb 5, 2008 12:34 pm
I like it.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Feb 11, 2008 10:25 am
very good poem
Comment by tobeloved: Feb 11, 2008 10:45 am
thanks everyone! =)
Comment by OverTheRainbow: Feb 27, 2008 5:23 pm
This is a good poem Makenzie! Or should I say: Macky-Poo!
-LOL- You did say you like to call everyone with a -poo at the endSmiley I think its cuteSmiley
Comment by tobeloved: Feb 28, 2008 2:56 pm
NOOO annie don't call me thatSticking tongue out that's my name for other ppl!!

thanks for commenting tho Smiley
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Mar 2, 2008 2:37 pm
i love it. really deep.
Comment by livelife: Mar 9, 2008 10:07 am
oh wow that is really good
Comment by Meggers: Mar 19, 2008 4:56 pm
love it sooo much
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