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True Happiness

I'm giving up the pain,
Letting go of the sorrow.
I've got everything to gain,
And my smile will not be borrowed.

I'm done traveling down this winding road,
I'm ready to stop and play.
I've dropped this emotional load,
And on the ground that load will stay.

Letting go of everything is what I tried,
When I was so close to the end.
It worked so well to my suprise,
And now my happiness is not pretend.

by Throughwithlove14
posted on 11/05/2009

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Comment by trailseekr: Nov 9, 2009 1:07 pm
Very nice. Moving on is difficult but so necessary.
Comment by deep: Nov 7, 2009 2:06 am
very touchable one .. ~~~
Comment by charlotte897: Nov 8, 2009 4:29 am
i like it its good and very well chosen words
Comment by DeepDestruction: Nov 5, 2009 8:38 am
Beautiful ^^
Comment by Springbok: Nov 5, 2009 12:14 pm
voting UP!!!
Comment by kingOVDAwest: Nov 5, 2009 3:41 pm
great job
Comment by SilentWords: Nov 6, 2009 1:43 pm
Yay! cool.
Comment by hutwohl58: Nov 13, 2009 1:24 pm
Good for you discovering that its just not worth carrying all that shit. You can only carry so much. And if your life is shit, and you want it to get better, you must let some of it go,so that you can carry some good stuff. Then after a while you realize why carry any bad shit at all, it just limits the good stuff.Hut.
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