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To far gone

I look up as i fall

I see your tears

I know your fears

Please, please don't cry for me

I'm to far gone i say as you reach your hand to me

Look away from this self destruction

So i can start the new construction

Of the new improved version of me

Then maybe you will see

I was perfect just the way i held you and showed i cared

But i'm to far gone

Soon Chris 2.0 will be here

Better than the last in every way

But still you will say

I miss the old you

or will you?

by AFireInYourEyes18
posted on 05/09/2008

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Comment by Darryn732: May 9, 2008 9:18 am
Good Write : I like It Smiley
Comment by coldfire146: May 9, 2008 9:26 am
i love it. it is very good
Comment by MyMisery: May 9, 2008 10:12 am
diffrent but i like it.
Comment by Avonexx18: May 10, 2008 9:00 am
This is very good wow great job
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: May 12, 2008 10:26 am
Sad face im not sure to be happy or sad....but good poem! very strong image to itSmiley
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