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The Mark of Society

The mark of society is slashed upon my wrist
I let it bleed
For society says I don't exsist
The mark of religion is causing pandemonium within
I can't take control
For religion tells me I am a sin
The mark of the media is burned upon my arm
I let it sting
They'll never know it was they who brought me this harm

by HeckYes
posted on 11/12/2007

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Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: Nov 12, 2007 7:40 pm
well since u dontknow what to think of it lol i thought i'd comment and let you know it's really goood Smiley
Comment by shirotora: Nov 13, 2007 12:19 am
awesome poem. its unusal but in a good way. a really good way.
Comment by HoldingOnForNow: Nov 13, 2007 3:43 pm
very good!! i like it a lot!!
Comment by HeckYes: Nov 13, 2007 4:28 pm
Thank you!
Comment by blah: Dec 13, 2007 6:17 pm
wow, i really like this one. its very interesting and unusual... really cool!!!!
Comment by biotch: Dec 14, 2007 2:23 pm
I think that this is a really cool poem... in an interesting way. I agree with everyone else that commented this. It's awesome!
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