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The Hunted

So much power lays in my camoflauged hands,
this buck in my veiw, how proud he stands;
It's as if he is posing for a magazine cover,
or trying to get the attention of a nearby lover.

Whatever the case, his life will soon be mine,
just a little something to stare at while I sip on some wine;
I think I'll put him next to the moose I just scored,
that should definitly keep the room from looking so bored.

Alright enough fooling around, it's time I claim my prize,
I take one last look at those innocent black eyes;
I prepare myself and drop my gun's deck,
just as massive teeth sink into the back of my neck.

by secretpoet
posted on 07/12/2007

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Comment by NeotericDawn: Jul 12, 2007 5:12 pm
Amazing! Good job!Smiley
Comment by missingmom: Jul 12, 2007 5:23 pm
Well! I didn't see that coming, neither did you! Good poem! The hunter becomes the hunted! Smiley
Comment by correy: Jul 12, 2007 5:37 pm
great job this is the best iv heard yet!!
Comment by footprints: Jul 12, 2007 9:09 pm
LOL! Nice twist - the laws of nature prevail.
Comment by kweenadoom: Jul 12, 2007 11:24 pm
i loves it!
Comment by nickson104: Jul 13, 2007 9:28 am
awesome poem like i kinda thought you were forcing some of the rhymes mind such as
'Whatever the case, his life will soon be mine,
just a little something to stare at while I sip on some wine'
it doesnt diminish how awesome the poem is though, i really like it Smiley
Comment by MsKeys1707: Jul 31, 2007 11:00 am
WOAH!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!
VERY VERY WELL WRITTEN
GREAT TWIST ON THE ENDINGSmileySmileySmileySmiley
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Nov 28, 2007 9:15 am
yeah that was great. what a twist!
Comment by tobeloved: Mar 4, 2008 5:08 pm
very well written
amazing twist!
Comment by Grammij: Aug 22, 2008 11:11 am
That's what you get for drinking that wine while hunting!!!!!!
Comment by ArcAngel: Nov 19, 2008 4:24 pm
Very good and another unexpected ending!!!
And like Grammij said don't drink wine when hunting!
Smiley
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