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That Girl

I see her eyes shining through
Her smile gazes at all around
She makes the world come undo
But where am I to be found?

She always has something to say
Something to make the guys laugh
I’ve learnt something new today
I think I chose the wrong path

In her you’ll see the confidence
She has no worries or fears
Unlike me, I get so tense
She’ll succeed throughout the years

I can’t compete with her skill
I’m just an outcast of her mind
For a life like hers, I would kill
Or is it just past she’s left behind?

by MyWastedYouthX
posted on 03/20/2008

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Comment by tobeloved: Mar 20, 2008 2:36 pm
Wow.. really good poem. Very well expressed as well. Keep writing Smiley
Comment by crazyforcodymylove: Mar 20, 2008 2:42 pm
wow this is good expressed really really good
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Mar 20, 2008 5:47 pm
wow....good stuff....
Comment by urabaka: Mar 24, 2008 3:27 am
Oh my god, I love this. Very well drawn out, and very well written.
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