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stories in the steel

staring at the side of this reflective surface
recalling the times iv had to make an offer
crimson threads across my skin to please you
my friend my saviour my god my forbiddin lover
watching the bad times in my life unfold on your face
your shining side so comforting
that cool sharp little flash
then relief like unleashing the ocean from my soul
i think i need more
i can hear you tearing through my skin
im shuddering at this weight unloading
oh yea it stings but this blood does taste good
like salty rusting copper
my friend hold on to one more memory for me
for the time being
ill be back to see you soon though

by BlackbookPast
posted on 11/06/2009

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Comment by SeldoonEeffoc: Nov 6, 2009 11:19 pm
wow. This actually makes a helluva lot of sense to me... ish that a good thing??
Comment by solonely: Nov 9, 2009 8:49 am
wow this is amazing, this is the first one of yours I've read in a while but it's excellent
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Nov 7, 2009 8:25 am
(lol) nice description, though, I have to say I DO like this, Chance...The metaphors, the dark but releasing vibe to this...you know,
you make such self-destruction seem like a romantic affair. now, that's clever.
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 10, 2009 6:10 pm
wow this is amazing. i really love this poem.
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Nov 10, 2009 6:35 pm
"about cutting. if you dont like it dont fucking comment"

I think you missed the point of the comment box.

Sorry if you don't like my "fucking comment".
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