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Silent Maidien

In the dead of night
silience became my friend
she spoke not of light
but my desire to sin

blanketed in her lusious words
we sung songs only we heard
bequeath in this utter silence
we danced alone through violence

so beautiful she stood out
speaking in tongues not words
she settle my thoughts of doubt
with gentle songs of birds

by ReverberatingSilence
posted on 11/06/2009

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Comment by SilentWords: Nov 6, 2009 4:21 pm
we danced alone through violence

That line really stood out to me. Wonderful!
Comment by nocturnus: Nov 7, 2009 7:35 am
You have gift mate, this is
awesome piece of work.
Comment by grunty: Nov 7, 2009 11:56 am
I don't think I've seen anything of this nature from you before.

You do not disappoint!
Comment by PrettyOdd: Nov 8, 2009 3:02 pm
speaking in tongues not words

Lovely poem, but for me that stood out the most. This does seem to be different from your usual work, in format at least. Still wonderful, though.
Comment by meltedsnowman: Nov 8, 2009 10:46 pm
geez.. each time you post something, its better then the last. something to remember indeed
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 8, 2009 10:48 pm
awww pretty
Comment by meltedsnowman: Nov 18, 2009 7:26 am
i remember that one and it still is one of your greatest peices
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