She's Not The Only One

this is really good...is this just something you though of or is it reeeally coming from somewhere inside you?hit me up with some mail. =)

Awesome poem. Hope you find direction for yourself through your writing. I think setting a goal for yourself-- perhaps a career, educational, or personal achievement goal--will be awesome for you. I felt your urgency for companionship and a relationship in your writing,and perhaps hope that one or both of the two will save you. However, I'll ask you to consider setting an achievable/long term goal for yourself BEFORE seeking a relationship. Without having direction for yourself first makes finding a good companion and relationship seem fleeting. Why? Companionship is helping one another; relationship is relating to a common anthem in both your lives. Companionship is not purposeful if both subjects are without direction. If you build a relationship with the core of your relation being loneliness, perhaps depression, the relationship will spin in circles with "No forward thoughts." Sorry for the long and overthetop review, just felt I've been there before! And hoping I can get some extensive reviews for myself. Posting poems online? I think that's what we're all really looking for.

Thanks for the reviews, but just a heads up: this poem has absolutely nothing to do with me, in case anyone was wondering. lol. Thanks though.

i like this one. I really like all of your poems, theya re so creative. I also like how tragic they are. It sounds weird, but you write good bad poems. (if you know what i mean).

Keep writing. You definately have talent.