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SEE WHAT I SEE

As I jump off this balcony,
I spread my wings to fly
Many things I can see with my sharp eyes
As my wings cut the wind,
I see all the worlds’ evils and sins
While I glide,
My tiny eyes view a bully take another kid’s pride
I fly to the west,
Only to see a robbery in progress
Now I am soaring over the highway,
I see a drunk driver swerving,
They don’t know it is there last day
I fly over the city,
Viewing drug dealers, crooked cops
And prostitutes with no dignity
I finally found a tree branch to rest on,
Because I am tired of flying around,
But there are people trying to cut the tree’s down
So they can build their factory,
Can’t they see there polluting the air they breathe?
I would say something if I could
And if I could fly off this planet called earth
I WOULD!

by JNYCE
posted on 05/06/2008

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Comment by loveme77: May 6, 2008 5:04 pm
ha I like it, it's witty but also serious. I like the way it's portrayed, good job. I enjoyed reading
Comment by JNYCE: May 6, 2008 6:43 pm
Thanks guys Smiley
Comment by tobeloved: May 6, 2008 5:31 pm
I like it too!! loveme77 is right! it is witty but it also speaks truth about what's going on, and I find it gives your opinion too.. although I could be wrong. Amazing job!!
Comment by mysterygrl: May 7, 2008 1:16 pm
this is really good! i like it alot
Comment by drkromance: May 8, 2008 4:17 am
I love it! It is amazing! Great job!!
Comment by pillowfangs: May 8, 2008 4:35 am
Its definatly a new out look on animal views of pollution with some human input thrown in. its great Smiley
Comment by Waterblaze3234: May 8, 2008 7:16 am
its so true! i like it alot!
Comment by asdfyz: May 9, 2008 6:35 am
WOW!! That is so true and amazing. I love that whole poem. Really cool thing to write about, the truth of the world is so haunting, isn't it.
Comment by JNYCE: May 12, 2008 1:30 pm
thanks
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