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Searching

I'm searching for something
I can't seem to find
Something for the soul
To refresh my mind

I'm searching for something
That still seems unknown
I'm had to fight my way here
I've been tripped, tossed and blown

I'm searching for something
To repiece my heart
To fight away the pain
Of us being apart

I'm searching for someone
To refil your place
To wipe all the memories
So i'll forget your face

But searching is useless
For now that I know
I'll never forgve myself
For letting you go


Sorry the poem is rubbish but you shouldn't expect any better from me

by belleamour
posted on 06/02/2007

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Comment by kayla: Jun 2, 2007 7:04 am
why you putting yourself down, your poems great and rhymey. i'll tell you what you need to search for, Confidence!Smiley
Comment by Novembre: Jun 2, 2007 7:11 am
u think u dont right good poems?!think again!nice work!
Comment by soul2soul: Jun 2, 2007 7:33 am
No this is not 'rubbish' this is good. I like it..
Comment by oldman: Jun 2, 2007 9:51 am
Find yourself first then you will have something to offer when you find some one else. I think this is why you let the other person go as you had to. You might just need the time to find you.
Comment by belleamour: Jun 2, 2007 10:49 am
Maybe thanks x
Comment by nickson104: Jun 2, 2007 12:58 pm
lol good advice has come, heed it and then you will feel better Smiley good poem it rhymes too !
Comment by simon: May 1, 2008 5:46 am
Great poem not at all rubbish,I think everyone is looking for something and that sums it up brillantly!
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