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Reflection

I look ahead, I see a girl
Full of shame, full of pain…
Stripped of…
All dignity, all joy
Hurt by friends…
Betrayed by family…
She has tattoos of permanent tear stains
She speaks…
Everyone hears…
No one understands…
She dreams in the day…
Toss and turn at night…
She has bruises the eye can’t see
Bruises the heart feels…
Memories so tragic
Thoughts of them can kill…
She has big, clear eyes…
Full of everything, saying nothing
Watching this girl…
Slowly beginning to cry…
(Lost in confusion, wondering why)
Suddenly, realizing this girl is I…
~KSC~

by MsKeys1707
posted on 04/08/2008

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Comment by poemsarebliss: Apr 8, 2008 9:51 am
nice..
Comment by meltedsnowman: Apr 8, 2008 10:04 am
im crying over here..that was awsome
Comment by bow16: Apr 8, 2008 11:07 am
Nice poem...It very good...
Comment by XneurotoxicX: Apr 8, 2008 11:10 am
awww.
Comment by hiddeninblood: Apr 8, 2008 11:46 am
very good...agree withevery1....Smiley
Comment by NeVeRmOrE: Apr 8, 2008 5:31 pm
nice
Comment by micahdavidcrump: Apr 9, 2008 9:56 pm
That was very good. i loved the Simplicity of it also. its nice when someone can say so much in a few words. Its what is implied that speaks
Comment by dakotadarcy: Apr 11, 2008 2:12 pm
Thats amazing...! I loved it! You use such a nice range of words and have a really good inmagination..x
Comment by Weltt: Apr 12, 2008 5:23 pm
Great job here! keep it up.
Comment by bloodypaintedart: Apr 15, 2008 4:23 pm
wow I love this, great writting this is, but so painful to know its true,you are gifted angel!
Comment by foreverendeavor1790: Apr 23, 2008 11:13 am
i'm sorry you feel that way and i know we have all been through many different thing none of them the same as anybody elses but if you ever need anyone to talk to i am here too ok.

Comment by foreverendeavor1790: Apr 23, 2008 11:13 am
by the way thanks for the comment you left on my poem!. ~smile~
Comment by AngelIndeed: Apr 23, 2008 11:15 am
Very well done you have my vote Smiley
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Apr 23, 2008 11:49 am
awesome poem! i love it!
Comment by MsKeys1707: Apr 28, 2008 8:29 am
Thanks everyoneSmiley
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