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Push You, Pull Me
Your "dying heart" is unable to live without her.
But she sucks every ounce of you out.
You're not real.
I don't even recognize your eyes.
And you say it's all your choice.
When she tells you no and your heart tells you yes
You follow her command.
When she tells you to go west, but you know home is east
You go miles away from where you belong.
Left is right and right is left.
Wrapped around her finger is not where you belong.
A fly caught in a spider's web is all you will ever be.
I do believe your cowardice is showing.
by thefadingscene
posted on 03/24/2008
But she sucks every ounce of you out.
You're not real.
I don't even recognize your eyes.
And you say it's all your choice.
When she tells you no and your heart tells you yes
You follow her command.
When she tells you to go west, but you know home is east
You go miles away from where you belong.
Left is right and right is left.
Wrapped around her finger is not where you belong.
A fly caught in a spider's web is all you will ever be.
I do believe your cowardice is showing.
by thefadingscene
posted on 03/24/2008
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Comment by Styrmwolf: Mar 25, 2008 12:40 pm
Very nice. It is often easier to fall prey to a false image then it is to see the truth and pull free. Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 25, 2008 1:24 pm
ILOVEYOU!Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 25, 2008 1:26 pm
okay. so now that i'm not bouncing up and down with glee at the last line,
yay chana!
written wonderfully.
i wish you could hear every conversation christina and i have ever had, just so you could know exactly how perfect that last line is.
Comment by Atwood: Mar 25, 2008 4:32 pm
..chana.
this sounds like me so bad. =o
Comment by Atwood: Mar 25, 2008 4:36 pm
i love you chana =D
shaun of the dead was on yesterday x)
i thought of youu
Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 25, 2008 6:38 pm
NO IT DOESN'T.
I DOES NOT SOUND LIKE YOU.
OMAN KID.
cause. i'm pretty sure kitten there doesn't suck as much as spider.
(i love double meanings. oman.)
ehhee. code names are fun, even if unitentional.
i need to stop saying oman.
will someone please disconnect my keyboard?
it really doesn't though. much. cause. you're emotion? its real. its not a cover-up. you are being honest, even though it's clearly tearing you apart. there's the big difference. his shit is such. well. bullshit. to be incrediably descriptive. sooo.
lets all go sing kumbaya in a giant pit with olive leaves.
Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 25, 2008 6:38 pm
IT* not i. but you knew that. Comment by thefadingscene: Mar 26, 2008 3:31 am
i love how jessi knows what i'm talking about.
=]
but after i wrote it and read it i actually did think of Adam in a few spots. But not the whole thing.
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Mar 26, 2008 8:26 am
wow...that's like...actually true...if I'm correct in thinking this is about what I think it's about...my obligation will be fulfilled by saying "THAT'S NOT TRUE" so I say it and also say it is true...btw...this poem is fricking amazing! like....yeah... amazing...IDK so I'm just gonna stop...