Poem of Quotes Members
Please log in below, or sign up.



Forgot Password?
Subscribe to a premium membership! Premium membership
Search for poetry anywhere! PoemofQuotes SE

Pretty Little Broken Feet

Break them. Hear the sickening snap, hear her strangled, pleading cries.

Wrap them. Layer after layer of silken torture.

Shape them. These pretty, little, broken feet.

Break them. Cage their every hope and dream.

Wrap them. Bind them with words and masks and finery.

Shape them. Into whatever you call beautiful.

by moonlightmage
posted on 03/13/2008

Vote: Vote upVote down
Comments: 14
Click here to send this poem to a friend

Comment by crazyforcodymylove: Mar 13, 2008 3:52 pm
wow this is a good poem i like the words you use great job!!!wow the first line is also really witten well great job!
Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 13, 2008 4:57 pm
last line.
*does italian finger kissy thing*

wow. this is like. intense hatred towards people who force their ideas of beauty onto others. thats what i get out of it. (or maybe that's me reflecting my own emotions on your words? idk. thats the problem with reading poetry w/ a bias)

this is amazing though.
awesome in the real sense ^.~

silken torture. there's a name for that. placing unlike next to something to make it stand out. *bad memory*

i like that you talk about dreams, because foot binding wasn't only about beauty, it was about forcing women into submission to be accpeted.

i also like how you put new meaning into the phrase "bind them". i don't quite get what you mean by words, but the masks and finery i understand. maybe by words you mean pretty, shallow conversations?
Comment by crazyforcodymylove: Mar 13, 2008 5:15 pm
WAIT I HERD ABOUT THIS IN LIKE THE SIXTH GRADE WOW YEAH I COULD BELEIVE THAT THEY DO THAT
Comment by leadme2temptation: Mar 13, 2008 6:13 pm
isn't that in japan or china? somewhere liek that i'd had that all the pain, i don't really think it stops may the pain does but still it's cruel
i like the poem
Comment by oceanreverie: Mar 13, 2008 7:08 pm
that is so strong. i am a complete femenist and this is one of the greatest things that bothers me about modern day society and different cultures. though i attempt to accept them, it is hard when these things are causing physical and mental pain on women. great job for putting it into words.
Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 15, 2008 3:18 pm
JUXTAPOSE!!!!

omg christina. weird.

so. how did i remember that?
american effing idol.
not even jking.
Comment by Flapjak: Mar 18, 2008 7:24 am
This is good stuff! Keep it up. There's a clear message in this.
Comment by wobbler: Mar 31, 2008 11:06 am
trouble wiv women is: they do it to themselves in the name of beauty/vanity/whatever. And the perpetrators of the above are normally older women,which makes it a truly feministic excercise. I like knock knees, so maybe they could giv'em ricketts instead Excellent poem
Comment by danielle: Apr 11, 2008 3:20 am
i heard about this before.. they do it in malaysia.. a small state called Melaka.. it's like and age old trdition or something but it doesnt happen anymore..
Comment by friendZdogZ: Apr 27, 2008 6:20 pm
i heard about this, chinese do it to fit their feet into really really really small shoes and they say it's the most beautiful
Comment by Liveanddie: May 9, 2008 12:56 pm
awesome!
Comment by bloodypaintedart: Jun 12, 2008 2:15 am
like it!
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Oct 6, 2008 5:37 am
I heard this in poetry club. and I like it here too! YAY FOR CHRISTINA AND ALL HER AMAZINGNESSISMS!!! psh yeah thats right...don't ask...I had caffeine......you're my favorite darling which does not have a K in it...yeah don't ask bout that one...
Comment by TheDarkShadow: Oct 6, 2008 9:51 am
MEH?!
Add a comment: