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Poeticize Yourself

Do you realize
that you accessorize
and customize yourself
just so you won't be
ostracized or marginalized
by the one's you idealize
as friends
One must not minimize how
this can jeopardize
how you self legitimize

Instead you must weaponize
what you vocalize
Revitalize, colorize and texturize,
so that they may visualize
what you philosophize
And never plagiarize,
because you will you be demonized
for what you burglarized
And all your future efforts may be
nominalized as cannibalized

Personalize your anesthetized personality
Poeticize yourself so that
your work may be recognized
or even epitomized as worthy
of being publicized
And then, as you soliloquize,
people may become mesmerized
as you tantalize
their sterilized senses

by grunty
posted on 10/30/2009

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Comment by Uncertain: Oct 31, 2009 6:53 am
I like it!

It remind me of 'superfluous', not the message but the choice of words. Amazing

and even more amazing, I understand this!

Comment by flippinthrulife17: Nov 4, 2009 10:45 am
*grinning* you tell em' Grunts ;)
Comment by Telemachus: Nov 1, 2009 6:39 pm
Word. This is pretty much a rap - try it - it works!

Most def...
Comment by SilentWords: Oct 30, 2009 9:45 am
Wow, this is amazing Grunty! The form, your choice of words, I am in a poetic shock! I bet spoken out loud it’s even better. This is a masterpiece! Absolutely stunning! (Still in shock)
Comment by chiwa: Oct 30, 2009 12:04 pm
Nice. I couldn't say that 10 times fast.
Comment by BlackbookPast: Oct 30, 2009 8:57 pm
dude this is freaking amazing...
Comment by xmyxlastxbreathx: Oct 30, 2009 10:06 pm
OMG freakin' phenominal!!!! loooove it!!! -votes up-
Comment by niallhybris: Oct 31, 2009 1:20 pm
i can imagine zack de la roche singing this lol good stuff! i got confused by it. fun times!
Comment by danielle: Nov 1, 2009 6:37 am
lalala.. i like this.. it sounds amazing out loud..
Comment by Dark: Nov 1, 2009 9:10 am
I like pie
Comment by PrettyOdd: Nov 1, 2009 11:43 am
I'm agree with Silent. Wow.

I love the way you can manage to put these words together and still keep a nice flow to the poem.
Comment by darksideofme: Nov 1, 2009 6:19 pm
Rap Master Grunty!!!!
Lol... I could put a phat beat behind this and I would love to hear you Spitt it.
O_o
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Nov 2, 2009 6:19 pm
soliloquize

While i'm not sure that's a word, it bloody well should be.
Language is a beast, i believe you have it whipped here.
Comment by iusedto: Nov 3, 2009 12:39 am
oh how these comments make me laugh. as always great work grunty.
Comment by true: Nov 3, 2009 7:20 am
great grunty.... really great.... Smiley Smiley Smiley
Comment by Tinkerbellpixie: Nov 15, 2009 7:08 pm
I read this aloud and it is amazing!!
It's especially great because it doesn't feel forced. It flows wonderfully.

"And then, as you soliloquize,
people may become mesmerized
as you tantalize
their sterilized senses"

I love this part best, I think. Soliloquize. That's a fascinationg word.
Great job grunty! This just made my day.
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