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Overthrow

the tone of the sky
expresses anger,
decorated with shadows-
I make believe, it’s all for me

a reluctant recluse of more than
one device, finds sanity less attractive
then the day before

physical pain penetrates
the orange and purples of the evening,
plump pupils part with creations final stand
and I sit at Pain’s demand
(A well trained recruit)

each crease speaks of the many folds
where I looked down the barrel
of defeat;

always waiting for that next trigger

by SilentWords
posted on 10/27/2009

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Comment by fanpirewerevocate: Oct 27, 2009 2:12 pm
BANG!!

sorry, I just had to say that..
Excellent poem!
Comment by chiwa: Oct 27, 2009 2:55 pm
wonderful descriptions. good job.
Comment by Telemachus: Oct 27, 2009 7:05 pm
see previous comment - I'd go to see the movie of this one.
Comment by mrbrightsidexx: Oct 27, 2009 8:42 pm
mouth watering poetry
Comment by PrettyOdd: Oct 27, 2009 8:50 pm
the tone of the sky
expresses anger,
decorated with shadows-
I make believe, it’s all for me

What a way to start off. Wonderful.
Comment by grunty: Oct 28, 2009 5:43 am
the tone of the sky
expresses anger,
decorated with shadows-
I make believe, it’s all for me

I have to agree with Pretty...Damn, what a way to start!

Dark art at it's finest!
Comment by Throughwithlove14: Oct 28, 2009 9:01 am
Loved^^^ Lol
Comment by Rachel: Oct 28, 2009 3:56 pm
I really enjoyed this poem. Your word choice was exceptionally unconventional which made this a lot more captivating for me than other poems that I have read. I was also enthralled by your usage of capital and lower case letters in order to highlight your point and set your poem apart from ordinary works. It reminded me a lot of ee Cummings.
Comment by DARKFLOW: Oct 30, 2009 1:29 pm
ALL I GOTTA SAY IS....
THIS POEM WAS FUKKIN DOPE!!!
WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THIS...
BUT THE WORD AND STUFF AND HOW YOU COMPARE THINGS LIKE HERE COLOR WITH PAIN...
ITS HARD...YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN RITE!
BUT ANYWAY GREAT POEM KEEP IT UP
Comment by JamesR: Oct 31, 2009 7:42 pm
"plump pupils part with creations final stand" That is so cool...A wonderful read. =D
Comment by niallhybris: Nov 1, 2009 12:31 pm
powerful
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