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On Bended Knee

Okay... I can't get the formatting on this website to work... so I created a blog just for this poem!! =]

http://alomentis.blogspot.com/

Sorry for the trouble... I'll post the poem here too, but its just not the same without the formatting.

Here I am on bended knee
Chained and locked by choice
It's my sins that bind my soul
I cannot move ahead in life
My stagnant journey haunts my mind
My will to overcome is weak
I hear the devils voice and fear it
Once again I choose the wrong
In despair I cry "Dear Lord,
Please Forgive and heal my heart"
The Lord replies "I know how you feel
I also know your pain is real
You've submitted to my will
And now your Spirit I shall heal
Now I'm healed I'll do my part
I cry as Christ removes the cord
"I'll choose the right, and I'll be strong"
Once again I feel the spirit
The Lords Will now is what I seek
His journey for me I shall find
He'll move me through all my strife
'To never sin again' My Goal
My Lord has given my my voice
Here I pray on bended knee.

by Alomentis
posted on 04/29/2008

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Comment by SLAYER101: Apr 29, 2008 4:11 am
It's alright but a weird way to start a poem though
Comment by Alomentis: Apr 29, 2008 4:15 am
Thanks for the input, I'm curious though what you mean by a "weird way to start a poem"? and did you visit the blog? cause seriously its almost necessary to understand the poem fully.
Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: Apr 29, 2008 6:18 am
omggg this is really good...and i went to the site uve put up..REAALLLYY REALLLYY GOOOD!! very creative
Comment by Holychild: Apr 29, 2008 8:46 pm
i'v seen it all. i also left a comment. keep up the good work. Jesus is coming. Love&Peace:]
Comment by zoe: May 26, 2008 5:06 pm
GREAT POEM.......IM JUST THE SAME AS U.....IF U KNOW WAT I MEAN
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