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Mr. Nice Guy (Try Your Luck pt2)

You think that I lie
you think that I would
how could you think that
do you think that I could

It doesn't matter now
because I know what I am
but I guess you don't have a clue
who I am

YOU are the one
spreading your disease
making me look like the bad guy
which everyone believes

You need to stop
because you fight for nothing right
enough is enough
it's a lost cause to fight

If you choose to be stubborn
then try your luck
but I will come out the victor
because I don't give a fuck

I'll play your game
until you finally stop trying
I'll demolish that web you spun
with all of your damn lying

by TheDarkShadow
posted on 02/05/2008

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Comment by tearsofrain: Feb 5, 2008 11:04 am
prove them wrong.
show us you're not the bad guy.
Comment by TheDarkShadow: Feb 5, 2008 3:34 pm
my efforts are never enough for you people

why try for something that i know will fail to come?
Comment by tearsofrain: Feb 5, 2008 3:50 pm
i ask myself that often.
i guess that's just the way i was raised.
like, why bother at anything, when there will always be someone better than you?
its something we all have to live with.
please stop refering to me and my friends as "you people". i would have though we meant a bit more to you than that.
Comment by HoldingOnForNow: Feb 6, 2008 5:43 pm
i like it so muchh!! you did a brillant job with it...i feel that way like im the bad guy in the situation but its not me...keep writing...
Comment by Poison: Feb 7, 2008 9:38 am
Very good hun...Keep it up...And Hun i know what its like i ask myself time and time again why do i even bother when i know im setting myself up for failure each time..But soon enough it will amount to success...I promise you...Its always okay in the end if its not okay then its not the end sweetie..
Comment by EveofDespair: Feb 14, 2008 8:22 am
wow you seem really pissed...just try and get perspective...or say FUCK YOU to the person...oh wait, you already did...haha...anyways great poem...
Comment by brokenXbruisedXbleeding: Feb 16, 2008 8:40 pm
i like your style of writing
Comment by sorrowfulsoul: Mar 5, 2008 3:14 pm
Great poem,
Great poet,
Have a lot of feelings,
And sure do show it.

You truly are a great poet. Keep it up!
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