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Mourning Sorrow

Depression,
sadness,
emotions of sorrow,
and hate.
I'm mourning you now,
what a cruel twist of fate.

You've been stabbed with kindness,
and tortured with love,
care twisted the blade,
while she watched from above,
happiness whipped you,
with a lash made from bliss,
poor sadness was killed,
throat slit by a kiss.

Sorrow endured,
longest of all,
twisting my trust,
not allowing the past to dissolve,
valiant effort it made,
but in the end, to love it did fall.

Devoid of these emotions,
all I am is happy,
no sense sadness,
I'm left with nothing but glee,
makes it hard to be violent,
or create poetry,
so I write now in mourning,
of the sorrow in me.



Dedicated of course to my fiancee' Jaymee, who's entirely responsible for all of this.

by SinnerIndeed
posted on 03/27/2008

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Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Mar 27, 2008 11:43 am
wow thats pretty good Smiley
Comment by cryingblackblood: Mar 27, 2008 12:48 pm
its a great poem..i can't explain how but i know what it means..atleats i know what it means to me
Comment by phantomhearts: Mar 27, 2008 12:59 pm
this is a great poem...really felt every word....thanks for writing it...
Comment by AngelIndeed: Mar 27, 2008 2:07 pm
aw baby i love it very good job......theres birdies in my back yard
Comment by crazyforcodymylove: Mar 27, 2008 4:00 pm
lol this is good!!! i mean this is goose! lol the jaymee talk to the birdies talk to the birdies!
Comment by Smitty: Mar 27, 2008 6:01 pm
nice job! really good stuff! i liked the last two lines in particular..keep writing!
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