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Mental War

I wage war against myself
Sure I have many casualties
but who hasnt

I am my own greatest critic
Maybe its not that i hate myself
Myself just hates me

Bearing arms against that which is me
The person who i can love or hate
Depending on what i can make of it

Im not all that bad am i?
I think theres two of us inside my head
Cant you see, cant you see?!

Im arguing with him again
These fights are what they call a
Lost cause

Even though Im physically present
Im spirtually out of mind, you know maybe all hope
Is Not Lost.

for me anyway.
for you? thatd be what they call a
Different Story

by EdensApple91
posted on 05/02/2008

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Comment by coldfire146: May 3, 2008 3:08 pm
i also sometimes get mental wars ecpacially when i get pissed off.then i really can't be helped lol
Comment by loveforeverlivelonger: May 3, 2008 12:51 pm
Hey empty your mail box
Comment by loveforeverlivelonger: May 3, 2008 12:20 pm
Wow this is really good great job buddy!!!!
And it makes sence


*don't know how to spell that*
Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: May 2, 2008 10:59 pm
reallyy goood!!... I get these mental wars in my head too..goin crazy I think

enjoyed reading this ..im sure many can relate n will like it also
Comment by meltedsnowman: May 7, 2008 8:25 am
agree with childofthenight...amazing..and i know how it is too...
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