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Medical Mayhem

Medical Mayhem

Doctors rushing everywhere
Yet am I left standing here
They attend to [patients with care
But what am I? Am I clear?

No one notices the blood,
Or heard the screams
They don’t see me dying
Nor do they hear me crying

They rush past me
Everyone in a hurry
The nurses’ claming patients
The doctors attend

What about me?
Can’t they see me bleed?
I got shot in the arm and leg
And have a bad bruise on the head

I could have internal bleeding as well
At any point I could drop dead
Are these doctors blind!?
I am a patient in need

If only they would slow down
They would see
That I am in need
They have to stop the bleeding

I take a seat, as I feel drowsy
All the hustle and bustle, so noisy
My eyes close as I slowly die
One tear falls out my eye

21.01.08

by friendZdogZ
posted on 01/22/2008

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Comment by Poison: Jan 22, 2008 12:05 pm
Awww sooo sad..But i know how it is...
Comment by forevergone1790: Jan 22, 2008 12:24 pm
thats so sad.. but i have to say that it was a very good poem..
Comment by cryingblackblood: Jan 22, 2008 12:30 pm
very nice...sad but true in a strange way
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 23, 2008 8:26 am
great poem Kira
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