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losing me

So god damn ugly,So god damn gross,
My flaws are what hurts me the most.
i want to be pretty i want to be,
Not just any girl i wanna stay me.

i starve for the beauty i long for,
to be the girl that men adore.
i take into my hands the power of will,
through all my changes i remain me still.

make-up pours from my hands to cover my face,
i put a LOT extra on just in case.
my hair is layered in nothing but spray,
through all this its me i will remain.

my hips are to big,they go with my thighs,
something descusted by many guys.
my boobs are to small to match my body,
non-the-less im me,nothing close to hottie.

by NeVeRmOrE
posted on 05/01/2008

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Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: May 1, 2008 10:08 pm
look, honestly...good lookz are great if your gunna be sitting ther staring at someone for the rest of your life...but in the end looks isnt gunna matter...be urself..itz about conversating and personality

good poem though..but dont put urself down like that..it only gives people more reason to put u down aswell
Comment by Thorne: May 1, 2008 10:38 pm
nice honest poem. i liked it.

(i think you meant "losing me", not "loosing")
Comment by coldfire146: May 2, 2008 7:23 pm
don't wory i feel the same way, i always get called ugly or fat, or stupid and crap like that. all i can saY IS YOU CANT LET IT GET TO YOU b/c true beauty is in your heart and not the sise of your breasts or hips or any other part of you be beautiful by saying you are beautiful not that you're ugly cause you're not Smiley
Comment by kaylasheray: May 2, 2008 7:23 am
i liked it....
looks arent everything
and for the guys who think they are, they're just jerks
Comment by emogothjen: May 2, 2008 12:42 pm
hun, all the fuck big boobs get you is some ass wanting to grab and feel. if you feel that way about urself then you can't blame ne one else. i couldn't care less about how i look. i'm emo and don't give a shit. and besides, define pretty and don't use another person as an example or society's image of it. just be ur self b/c look at it like this, 30 to 40 years from now, these people sayin this won't mean shit plus you'll be old and everyone with big boobs, fake or real, they'll be to their knees unless they keep haveing sugery and no one wants to see granny with big perky breast. wat i'm sayin is, i know how you feel cause i use to be like that, and ur only gonna be miserable tat way.
Comment by mysterygrl: May 14, 2008 11:59 am
hey the only guys your going to get if you are really good looking are the kind who are with you for you looks not for who you really are.
the poem was great!
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