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Little Weeping Willow by the Sea
Of the loveliest sights
No other fairs
The one by the sea is for me
When she spoke
My heart felt every vibration
A moment of truth
A moment never forgotten
My heart carries her
She is my muse
She is of worth
She is anticipated
Kini Kai
by oldman
posted on 06/12/2007
No other fairs
The one by the sea is for me
When she spoke
My heart felt every vibration
A moment of truth
A moment never forgotten
My heart carries her
She is my muse
She is of worth
She is anticipated
Kini Kai
by oldman
posted on 06/12/2007
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Comment by oldman: Jun 12, 2007 11:31 pm
Reposted for whitephoenix to view.Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Jun 12, 2007 11:39 pm
Awesome poem.Comment by footprints: Jun 13, 2007 1:36 am
Beautiful! Very tender yet powerful in its simplicity!
I like 'she is anticipated' at the end - it hangs in the air like a rainbow, never knowing when it will reappear
Comment by kayla: Jun 13, 2007 2:01 am
very beautifulComment by Whitephoenix: Jun 13, 2007 5:27 pm
Beautiful. So much better than my work. Thank you so much for posting this.Comment by missingmom: Jun 13, 2007 9:27 pm
I've never seen a weeping willow by the sea, that would surly be something to remember and to anticipate seeing again when you had. Thanks again for sharing such a wonderful poem.