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Just rember these children.

You are a slave to so many things,
To fashion to conformity,
To diamonds and rings,

You claim to be your own,
You say you can see things clearer,
But look around,
and it will all look like a mirror,

You make up problems,
And fuel your own tears,
You create your own pain,
You imagine your own fears,

And so while you toss your useless prayers,
And exaggerated lies into the night,
While you convince yourself that you cant go on,
That every day is a fight,

A child with bloodstained hands,
Holds his head low,
Lives through prostitution,
At night has no where to go,

A ten-year-old girl,
Plays guardian to her mother’s baby,
And the chance she will eat at night,
Is always a “maybe”,

So next time you cry,
Because no one cares,
Because no one understands,
Because no one answers your prayers,

Just remember these children,
As your ipod and TV blares,
For while your playing commander to you own problems,
these are the children of whom nobody really cares.

by shirotora
posted on 05/14/2008

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Comment by ashuhhland: Jun 30, 2008 9:26 pm
o wow thats so true. and sad. really great poem.
Comment by rosesANDletters: May 14, 2008 3:58 pm
beautiful.
Comment by UnderUmbrellas: May 14, 2008 6:49 pm
Its real touching and gets the point across. Makes you think how lucky you are to just be able to eat whenever you want.
Comment by bloodypaintedart: May 16, 2008 6:26 pm
you get my point across well!
Comment by thatgirlyoucantforget: May 17, 2008 6:58 pm
awesome poem
Comment by drkromance: May 18, 2008 12:06 pm
Omg that is so sad but so very true. It is an amazing poem and filled with so much emotion. Truly amazing.
Comment by friendZdogZ: May 20, 2008 1:12 pm
wow this is beautiful. it;s totally a real deal, great job
Comment by mysterygrl: May 22, 2008 2:47 pm
wow this is really good
Comment by asdfyz: May 23, 2008 6:49 am
wow. That is so true. It jsut puts everything into perspective so much.

your poem is so beautiful. it makes me teary eyed.

You don't realize how good you have it,even when things are shit, until you realize that people have worse lives than you EVERY DAY!
Comment by loveme77: May 26, 2008 3:55 pm
SO true. Oh my god.
This really opens people's eyes. it is amazing.
Comment by Bourne: Jun 2, 2008 11:29 am
wow you got a wicked way with words. swell poem!
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