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It Taunts Me

It sits there, calling my name.
It's shiny metal sparkling in the light.
“Take me... use me,” it calls
I know I can't but it's hard to resist.
I can feel the promise fading from my memory.
“Take me... use me,” it calls
An addiction like no other.
So good yet so bad.
How do I escape this trap?
“Take me... use me,” it taunts.

by LoveMeDead
posted on 10/08/2009

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Comment by Psychobabble: Oct 8, 2009 9:27 am

I like it

Comment by SisterofDarkness: Oct 10, 2009 5:29 pm

I know how you feel...people don't realize it, but it IS an addiction...and a bad one at that...stay strong hun it'll be okay...and i'm here for you whenever you need me.

Comment by ghostsprite: Nov 24, 2009 12:17 pm

i no dis feelin n im sowi dat u hav 2 go tru it 2

Comment by WordsOfEscape: Dec 15, 2009 10:32 am

that's deep but still its amazing

Comment by StormChaser: Dec 21, 2009 12:39 pm

amazing. I know exactly how you feel

Comment by Iridescent: Jan 17, 2010 4:16 pm

good good. i know what you mean.

Comment by princessNyra: Mar 12, 2010 12:14 am

WHOA!! I FEEL YA ON THIS ONE!! THIS ADDICTION HAS A WAY OF GETTING TO ME TOO Sad face

I ALMOST CANT HELP IT SOMETIMES...
"IT TAUNTS ME TOO"
BUT I KNOW SOMEDAY SOON, IT WILL STOP AND I'LL BE STRONGER THAN IT... I BELIEVE YOU CAN BE STRONGER TOO, (THAT'S IF YOU HAVEN'T GOTTEN OVER IT ALREADY). ALL THE BEST THOUGH.
ONCE AGAIN, GREAT POEM, NICE WRITE, I LIKE IT A LOT!!

Comment by flippinthrulife17: Mar 16, 2010 12:04 pm

*shivers* ahhh... Sad face

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