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I Looked

i saw you;
your inside
sung across
a page.
such worry,
such insight
i stopped asserting
when i knew
i knew nothing but what i feel,

i look
for beauty -

i look
for truth,

without
a hope
of ever
touching it,
like a vagrant
warming by
a campfire
burning
dollar bills.

by google
posted on 10/30/2009

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Comment by google: Nov 3, 2009 11:03 am

thanks grunty.
Smiley


thanks chiwa also.
Comment by SilentWords: Oct 30, 2009 1:08 pm
i look
for truth,

without
a hope
of ever
touching it,
like a vagrant
warming by
a campfire
burning
dollar bills

That's beautiful..

I would love to see what you see, your world seems magical.
Comment by JamesR: Oct 30, 2009 3:18 pm
Wow, an amazing poem.
"like a vagrant
warming by
a campfire
burning
dollar bills"
I agree with Silentwords. Your world seems magical.
Comment by google: Oct 30, 2009 7:52 pm
James and Silent
thanks
my world is magical, so is yours!
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Oct 31, 2009 2:36 am
Hey! I actually fully understood the whole meaning of this one! *claps happily!* lol o.o ehm, excuse me, (am a dork) >.> but Anyways, Google, this is lovely, I like it a lot!
Comment by niallhybris: Oct 31, 2009 1:53 pm
cool poem!

better than if i tried it. would have ended up

i look,
for ass.


i look,
for beer.


i need sobriety
Comment by iusedto: Nov 1, 2009 6:39 am
nicely put together, although i cant relate. lol nia
Comment by Tonya: Nov 1, 2009 1:57 pm
i really liked this poem greatly put together
Comment by Rokkii: Nov 1, 2009 2:51 pm
Beautiful!!! Amazing poem and yeah, idk how to explain it, just wow. Haha. =D
Comment by Xenoz: Nov 1, 2009 6:12 pm
It's just...its hard to explain what it is isn;t it? Its deliciously different! Amazing! Props to you good sir!
Comment by google: Nov 2, 2009 6:34 am
thanks for the comments!
Comment by chiwa: Nov 2, 2009 6:45 pm
Very interesting. Had to read it twice.
Comment by grunty: Nov 3, 2009 9:54 am
I must assert that I feel that this is nothing but truth and beauty!
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Nov 10, 2009 6:15 pm
A universal image of disaster, a burning dollar bill.

A wonderful poem, sometimes it's enough to just see.
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