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i did not kill me

take the knife and pull back the skin.
why dont we show the pain that were in?
put on a mask and hide all are lives.
cant you see these are insignificant lies.
im so sick of the pain that im in.
my lifes light is getting so dim
i take out the blade and cut on my skin.
to make sure i can still feel and breath.
i can feel the warmth of my tears.
trickle through my lips and my teeth
and as my lifes light is almost dead.
and my wrists are crying all over my bed
i did'nt kill me i was already dead.

by NeVeRmOrE
posted on 04/29/2008

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Comment by Alomentis: Apr 30, 2008 1:50 am
YOU don't have to die to get rid of your pain and sorrow. There was already someone who died FOR you, so you don't have to endure this alone. I am not the Evangelical type that goes around saying "Holy Holy Jesus, Save me, I am saved", but Our Saviors love is sufficient for everyone, this I know through personal experience. Don't give up. No need to die when someone else already has for you. The poem itself was well written, a lot of emotion... but I don't like these sad ones you write nevermore! life is full of sadness, but it can be so full of happiness too! ignore the bad, and seek the good. I want to read another poem from you, this time a happy one =]
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