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I boarded the train

Through the smog I boarded the train,
destination get out of my brain.
A journey I've made many times before,
to a place I don't even like anymore.
Still I return to where I am lost,
a freedom ride with plenty of cost.
A million miles away,
sat in this place.
Every given heartbeat going to waste.
And I know it, but journey on.
Same old scenery, same old song.
Destination nothing to gain,
through the smog I boarded the train.

by kayla
posted on 03/31/2008

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Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Mar 31, 2008 4:51 am
Think a lot of us can relate to this. Great poem. Sorry you feel so down *hugzies*
Comment by missingmom: Mar 31, 2008 5:48 am
Does it have any open seats? Send me a ticket. Sad face
Comment by babyboogt82886: Mar 31, 2008 6:43 am
LOVE IT! Smiley
Comment by MsKeys1707: Mar 31, 2008 9:00 am
this is amazing
it has a very unique flow
Great writingsSmiley
Comment by sgriffa282: Mar 31, 2008 2:31 pm
Nice Poem. Smiley Smiley Smiley Smiley Smiley
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Apr 1, 2008 4:42 am
Nice. I can relate.
Comment by BrittanyLafoe: Apr 1, 2008 7:52 am
I can;t GE TOVER how well you tie your poems together?!
Comment by porcupine179: Apr 1, 2008 8:22 pm
Smiley it really gives you a sense of nostalgia
Comment by shirotora: Apr 2, 2008 2:08 am
I rreally liked this peom, it had this great flow and i like how the end and start where the same, it had a great finish.
good work.
sx
Comment by Danielleybelley: Apr 2, 2008 11:54 am
I love how I was thinking of something similar about 2 minutes ago. This is really great<3
Comment by xmxixsxtxy: Apr 4, 2008 11:14 am
nice
Comment by nickson104: Apr 7, 2008 10:18 am
awesome, brilliant,dont know what to say, i love it
Comment by hoojitsu: Apr 8, 2008 11:07 am
I wish it was longer!
Comment by livelife: Apr 8, 2008 2:50 pm
great poem kayla, you really have the nack...
Comment by footprints: Apr 13, 2008 2:26 am
I love how you tied this one together by repeating the first line at the end. Does that mean it is a return ticket.. maybe better to buy a single journey next time! Sticking tongue out Sxx
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