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crying make puddles and laughter drys them up depression brings clouds and your smile brings out the sun
My crying makes puddles
Your laughter dries them up
They dissappear from your smile pulling me from the rut
My depression is black with clouds of grey
You are the sunlight that pushes them away
The thunder in my heart has lighting striking pain
You turn it into a cool breeze when I hear your name
My world is cold where nothing can live
Your spirit is life from the warmth that it gives
you are the rainbow that brightens my every day
your smile has the light of the sun and helps me find my way

by virtualbubblewrap
posted on 04/27/2008

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Comment by Stranger: Jun 16, 2008 4:21 am
You fill me from the inside out
I'll love you forever without a doubt

Also not as deep as some of the other stuff posted, but it's all I got.
This poem is great and I vote up!
Comment by sytycdlike3rinn: Apr 27, 2008 4:46 pm
this is cute, but i had to reread it cuz i didnt know where each sentance began and ended, lol but its still adorable! i'd like to read the end once you have it written.
Comment by SPAGACKULA: Apr 27, 2008 5:38 pm
My crying makes puddles
Your laughter dries them up
They dissappear from your smile pulling me from the rut
My depression is black with clouds of grey
You are the sunlight that pushes them away
The thunder in my heart has lighting striking pain
You turn it into a cool breeze when I hear your name
My world is cold where nothing can live
Your spirit is life from the warmth that it gives



Comment by friendZdogZ: Apr 28, 2008 1:54 pm
you are the rainbow that brightens my every day
your smile has the light of the sun and helps me find my way



that's all i got sorry it's not as deep as spagakula's bit. i was so stuned i couldn't come up with anything better
Comment by SPAGACKULA: Apr 30, 2008 6:03 am
You both {Virtualbubblewrap &
FriendZDogZ } Have done super Dynomite work here on this piece. I enjoyed creating this masterpiece with you two.
WE SHARED TALENT EQUALLY
WE GIVE CREDIT TO OUR TEAM
AS A TEAM!
MOST AWESOME!!!!!!
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