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Heartless
Heartless
Can u heal this sickness
That grew inside of me
Heartless
All the pain has me numb
I can't feel anything
I'll take the pill
Wash it down and just forget
Maybe later on regret but for now be still
Heartless
and crying out for help
Barely even able to speak out loud
So I fall to the ground without a single sound
Heartless
This leaves me restless
But still
I can't feel
So why not take it away now
While I'm numb
So I don't have to deal
Heartless
by Adisasternotseen
posted on 12/31/1969
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Comment by Courtney: Aug 3, 2006 5:51 am
this is really good
you are a good writer.
Comment by Skylar: Aug 5, 2006 9:23 pm
I agree with Britt and Courtney.
too bad they beat me to the commenting.
keep it up.
Comment by xfobxfanx: Nov 11, 2006 9:22 pm
very emotional....ur a verrrry good poet!Comment by InMyDreams: Nov 24, 2006 5:56 pm
i agree- very emotional. u r a really great writer... "heartless" ...wow
The onl mistake I see in her eit the second line. the "u" should be written "you"
the way that is written kinda draws the attention away, so the reader will look for more spellings like that instead of absorb the entire meaning of it.
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Brittney