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Handicapped



Your crippled heart, your tainted, incapable mind.
Lame grudges are the crutches you THINK keep you from falling
behind.
Your blind stubborness, your impaired 'common sense'.
Your insensitivy to sensitivity makes you look even more dense.
You're deaf to my frustration,
with your deformed and stupid intentions,
Need I speak LOUDER TO GET YOUR DISTRACTED ATTENTION?!

If you can find it in yourself to Judge someone else,
because of their 'incapability',

Than be not offended, When I say that,
"You are more inept than anybody".

by flippinthrulife17
posted on 10/28/2009

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Comment by Acheron: Oct 28, 2009 9:44 am
LOL wow love this poem
its really funny actually
Comment by Loveformusicandpoetry1790: Oct 28, 2009 9:50 am
Wow!, this is cute, I really like this and think that you did a wonderful job. It's different coming from a different, yet unique writers own way, by the way that's a compliment.. that is what makes you so wonderful..*smiles*
Comment by darknessofcrows: Oct 28, 2009 10:23 am
This is quite good, very good actually. It reallly gets the message across, and I like the way that it was worded. You've got my vote, Ducie.
Smiley
Comment by grunty: Oct 28, 2009 10:30 am
Hahaha!!!
That is funny.
But,
it is probably worded better than they deserve.

I think I would have just used one compound word.
Comment by kiraralee77: Oct 28, 2009 3:38 pm
lmao... very very nice!!. love this.
great work alissa!!
Comment by xDestructive: Oct 28, 2009 5:02 pm
ahh perfect description of someones arrogance ..this should get people like this to shut the fuck up.. i mean if it were aimed at me....I'd be silent so fast.... but most likely they won't be capable for it to sink in..just shows how dense they actually are.. wicked write alissa
Comment by KAS: Oct 28, 2009 5:28 pm
Yay
Comment by rayne482: Oct 28, 2009 5:42 pm
Wow.... i love it... very deep... very true.... great poem.
Comment by Healer: Oct 28, 2009 6:07 pm
niiicee!!!!!
Comment by nina777: Oct 29, 2009 10:03 am
good poem
Comment by nina777: Oct 29, 2009 10:04 am
very true i love it.....
Comment by JamesR: Oct 30, 2009 5:35 am
You tell em Flippin Sticking tongue out
Good read!
I laughed at "Need I speak LOUDER TO GET YOUR DISTRACTED ATTENTION?!"

Good use of caps =D
Infact. I'm facebooking that line. Current status. BAM. *Credits*
Comment by crazy8s: Nov 10, 2009 5:46 pm
WOO-HOO!! you go girl...i love it =^_^=
Comment by Shadow17: Nov 18, 2009 3:29 am
Wow, this is some powerful stuff! I love it! Awesome word choice and flow! Great job!
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