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Emotional Roller Coaster

I got on to your emotional roller coaster,
I was nervous at first,
As the straps tightened I heard a voice whisper
"Don't be afraid, come closer",
Your ride started out nice and calm,
I kept a fake smile on my face,
Acting as if nothing were wrong,
Then I would wipe away the sweat from my palms,
I was actually more scared than nervous...
The ride took a sudden turn!
Did you do that on purpose?
The ride gets very bumpy,
The calm ride is now scary,
Feeling like I lost you, where are you?
Before I got on you said you would always be there for me,
I feel the straps loosening,
I don't want to be here anymore,
Fearing I might fall out,
My feet are barely touching the floor,
I can’t even explain how I feel inside,
Then suddenly you come back and take control of your ride...
You always have to be in control,
In control of me,
How come you’re never the one in this seat!
You’re always the one making me go through loops,
Doing what ever you please,
When this ride stops I really think I should leave…

by JNYCE
posted on 06/03/2008

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Comment by CrimsonRain: Jun 3, 2008 9:43 pm
wow wonderful job Open smile
Flawless
Comment by aqua4ever: Jun 4, 2008 4:44 am
That was amazing! Simply amazing. Loved it. =]
Comment by goodmorningvoldemort: Jun 10, 2008 2:19 pm
it was kinda odd... but i still like it
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